Reviews for Everything She Could Have Hoped For
TheFifthCharmedOne chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Definitely a different pairing. While my inner James/Lily heart was screaming in protest, I couldn't help but see the appeal between these two. Nice job!

-Charmy
Dear. Dark. Destiny chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Fantastic job! I say you wrote that rather splendidly! I enjoyed reading it quite a lot. It was believable (especially for the characters you were given) and you put
'humiliate' in there in such a way that I had to go back and find the others (which is a good thing)! You have done really well! A few grammatical errors that were not severe, just little blips (i'm being picky). The beginning started off a tiny bit weak, but it's okay because your story progressed so well. :)

You will be scored on grammar, effective plot line, organization, gripping effect, and the rules followed, all scored out of . I wish you the best of luck!

Happy writings

Caroline