Reviews for In Which Neither Coulson nor Sherlock are Dead |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I must admit I found this last chapter a bit off from the rest of the story. Wouldn't the Avengers want to help Sherlock track down and stop Moran? Perhaps, if you do decide to write that sequel, the beginning could stop Moran and then other "fun" adventures based on the films could occur. Regardless, thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It wasn't too bad. Certainly there were some things, but there are always some things. :) Great story, I'm glad you stuck with it til the end! Good luck on future stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Coulson smiled at him sincerely. "You're lucky you haven't faced a world-threatening crisis, you wouldn't thank me then." "I don't know, it might stop the team's bored hysterics," John said teasingly. Sounds like opportunity for a sequel. chances of Moriarty still being able to pay the unknown sniper almost a year after his death were slim. Not impossible, but slim. So the chances of the sniper still being interested in John were also slim. The sniper might have personal interest invested in attacking John. Jealousy? Personal oath that everybody who was ever his target, dies from his bullet? Good day, good night, and good luck, Bruce, Clint, John, Sherlock, Tony. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to see more of their interactions, and I mostly loved this story (sorry, I'm still not a fan of slash). It all worked out for everyone, and for that I'm grateful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw great end to a great story. It like the quiet ending thy wraps everything up and make you feel good! I like it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the premise of this fic, and I quite like what you did with it. The characters all felt like themselves, and really, it would take someone as awesome as John to even come close to substituting for Coulson. One quibble, though - and so glaringly wrong that it kept taking me out of an otherwise good story - Black Widow's name is Natasha Romanov. The Natasha/Natalie thing is fine - I didn't know the bit about Russian names and terms of endearment, but it was quite interesting - but her name is not and never was Romanova. I also felt like the characters all opened up too easily - how they felt was realistic, but I'm not sure any of them would have articulated it as readily as they did. Overall, though, good work, and I hope you do write that sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, the last chapter was mice, though I wished you had written the scene of each Avenger threatening Sherlock. That would be a hell of a bonus, and I think Clint defnitly should be learnhow to play the Celo... Lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its okay I like the story but can't wait for your come back on this again XDDDDD I love it so much when I read the sniper part that it was john's and might go after him I though I was going to cry because he might kill John but it didn't happen so I'm thankful about it so good luck finishing your other stores and getting new ones once your done! XDDDDDDDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe... Cute ending :3 I like this idea of a sequel *gives you a plate of cookies and a glass of milk* MARVELOUS JOB! KEEP WRITING! _ |
![]() ![]() This is so AWESOME! I love this story and I love the way you write! Thank you for writing this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooooh! SEQUEL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. This was such a great story and thanks for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, i loved this story. thanks a lot for sharing! i really hope that there will be a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Frankly i'd love to see Sherlock reaction to being found and drug to the states |