|Reviews for Ever I Saw|
| nancyozz chapter 1 . 3/2
God this is perfect
| Cairistona chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Lovely and darling and adorable and fluffy fluffy fluffy! XDDDDDDD Wonderfully done!
I love how you say, “she changes to channel so fast.” The word “quickly” wouldn’t have described it the right way. So. That’s awesome.
“It’s only background noise” “She picks up an issue of Cooking Light” –Both splendid at conveying how completely uninterested she is. :)
I like how you address her name Pepper! X) So cute!
And then it’s adorable at “the first time she actually talks to him…” She’s spoken to him before, yelled, even, but not actually talked.
The first time she cries for him… D’awwww! X)
Mistletoe, ambulance, six figures. Adorably funny! :)
And I like it how there’s a distinction; he kisses her, and then later, she kisses him.
And the ending is so sweet. All of it is sweet. X)
| Werde Spinner chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Awwww... This is incredibly sweet and well done. It took me a moment to figure out the last one, but... awwww... so sweet... it was the best one of all!
| kcarolj65 chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Wasn't sure I was going to like this - I'm new to the IM fandom, and I'm encountering a lot of subpar fanfic as I indulge my new obsession - but this is definitely one of the better stories I've read. Well done!
| CaptainTish chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
This is absolutely gorgeous. Going straight on my recs list.
| Tiva4evaxxx chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
The idea behind this is so clever, and you're done it perfectly - beautiful writing :)
| Miran Anders chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Oh! Such a nice series of vignettes! And the end... perfect. I enjoyed this very much!
| Eldorian66 chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
AW! That was sweet!
| ElphabaROCKS chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
This is such a great story and such a clever concept. I might do something like it...
| Alexendria Carter-O'Neill chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
I love it!
| SherlockianGirl chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Wow, this was really powerful and done so perfectly in that lilting rhythm you used. I love how you were able to characterize them so well in so few words-it really told an entirely believable story of Tony and Pepper's origins! Great job, m'dear!
| Fraulein Takoor chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
OH! That was so cute at the end! I liked it!
| Beguilingirl chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
awwwwwwwww... I like it all. Although i think you should put the accepts jewelry to after they make love- seems more realistic.
| louvreangel chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Awwww this was sooo sweet *heart* Especially the ending. I reeealy luv it so I am going to put this on my faves. Great job! :))
| fantasia-49 chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
oh excellent really and so cute especially the end!
I love it!