Reviews for The Cupcake Queen
boopgirl chapter 17 . 9/23
Loved it
Sassyvampmama chapter 17 . 10/29/2016
So cute, thanks for sharing.
MsLiss chapter 17 . 7/8/2016
Congrats and thank you
MsLiss chapter 16 . 7/8/2016
Such a lovely story thank you
MsLiss chapter 11 . 7/8/2016
No way was I expecting that
He kept that bottled fur 8 years. Wow
MsLiss chapter 10 . 7/8/2016
And all this time his head is so far up his own butt he has no idea what Bella has been going through or that Te has competition
twlightbella chapter 17 . 4/4/2016
Happy ending
twlightbella chapter 14 . 4/4/2016
Aww
twlightbella chapter 5 . 4/3/2016
Aww sweet date
ChristyWIX chapter 17 . 8/3/2015
What a lovely ending to this tale. I loved that they got married. Freaked out a little by her accidental pregnancy . . . only because of his past and I was scared of his reaction. Clearly she was scared too. It could not have been a better reaction though. Loved that he was elated and very ready to be a father. Having him with his little Melody Sage was such a sweet time to read. Thank you for sharing your imagination. Enjoyed this. ~Christy
ChristyWIX chapter 16 . 8/3/2015
I was wondering when that piano of his would come back into the story. This was a perfect way to reintroduce it. What a spectacular engagement. Definitely one you would soon forget. I loved that he did it with a cupcake . . . bringing it full circle. Very fun. I really liked her business plan for taking more of an ownership role and letting Lauren be her partner, with Emmett running things. Expanding even. All of it sounded wonderful. I liked that Emmett popped into the mix, in a very subtle way. Her meeting Collin Brady was funny . . . Edward teasing her, even funnier.
ChristyWIX chapter 15 . 8/3/2015
I was surprised it took them this long to say they loved each other. That was very evident, quite early on. He even said it to himself, about her, quite a number of chapters back. I would've though they would have confessed this to each other before now. Just very happy they finally did. I'm proud of them for making it as far as they have sexually. I figured once he jumped that hurdle, he would be an all in type of man. That there would be no turning back for him and he would become quite the physical person with her. She is not complaining one bit.
ChristyWIX chapter 14 . 8/3/2015
Triple coverage is what finally got his mind set where it needed to be. I am proud of her for taking that extra step with the diaphragm. Hubs and I never wanted children, so I was on the pill forever and he wrapped at the same time. Successfully managed to skip the children . . . YAY! I am so glad that them talking about what steps they would take, along with the support she gave him through it, worked for Edward. Would love to have read what was going through his head at the time. Lovely dinner they shared ahead of time too. Clearly, he was a man on a mission, right after that dinner was finished.
ChristyWIX chapter 13 . 8/3/2015
I figured he has called Jasper, being he is his best friend. I really like what Jasper had to say too. He basically called him an idiot, without saying the words. At least Jasper helped Edward think clearer. If anything he helped him see reason through his haze. I'm very glad that he knew he was the one at fault and went to her with an apology. Even if he lost his shit all over again inner living room. Sill don't see the connection between what happened with Kate and Edward having anything to do with trust. I can see him being freaked out about the potential of getting someone accidentally pregnant and the repercussions of that. But trust issues, makes me scratch my head. That is on me though, certainly not you. He has really got to get his head together though. If he keeps being so wishy-washy he may actually chase her away. Even though she believes right now that she isn't going anywhere. If he keeps not trusting her, she may just walk away.
ChristyWIX chapter 12 . 8/3/2015
I really like the head space he is in, in this chapter. He knows he needs to do better for Bella's sake. He's trying his hardest to get his mind straight. At least they don't have any issues every other aspect of their relationship. The romantic date at Moonshadows was lovely. There date at home later in the week even better. Him trying, yet failing, was good and it is those baby steps that will eventually get his mindset in the right place. Her complete understanding and letting him know so, was even better. Unfortunately, he's and idiot and stormed out of Sparkles without even saying anything. At least her chimes alerted her to his being there . . . at least I hope it did. I also hope that she is at his house later, when he gets back from being with his friend, to rip him a new asshole for presuming the worst of her. Kate never cheated on him, they lost a baby. For him to jealousy leave without saying anything doesn't make sense, at all. If anything, it would have made sense if he would have stayed and given Jake dirty looks and gone possessive. Running away in a jealous rage was kind of out of character for your Edward.
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