|Reviews for Lullaby|
| The Fox Familiar chapter 3 . 1/19
So your Sue knows about the Cybertronian language, tags along with everybody and goes on EXCELLENT ADVENTURES, DUDE!
Pretty damn funny that you want to hear everybody's thoughts on this story, yet when it's something you don't like, you cry don't like/don't read.
To Hell with you. Your story is still garbage from beginning to end. She's a Sue with some special power and gets accepted and finds love and what have you, but all she is is an anime insert of you.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 2 . 1/19
Why is Chi carrying a sword when she has guns? Kinda pointless, isn't it? But oh, that's right; she's a Mary-Sue. Not only that, but she tags along with the main cast with absolutely no qualms, and she has little to no character development. If you want this story to even stand out, you need to delete it and start over. Because this is completely stupid, man. She has throwing knives and carries around all these weapons when she doesn't need them. She's supposed to be a body-guard; what kind of modern bodyguard carries around all that? It's stupid.
She's also pulling bullets out of her skin and doing all these amazing stunts when she is physically incapable of doing it. She wouldn't be able to carry all of her weapons and do all her amazing moves, because she's a woman and can't carry as much as a man. Want to call me sexist? Go ahead, but it still doesn't change the fact that your OC is a Mary-Sue.
And the Autobots just tag along with it. Lovely.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 1/19
So her eyes change colour depending on her mood, her hair is blonde with red streaks, she is 5'8 and weighs 157 lbs, and she is the best body-guard in the business? Sorry, but your feminist Sue won't register with me, and not to mention this is stolen from FaeDemon's story "Her Twins".
You better have an explanation, woman.
| JerseyPrime23 chapter 15 . 1/3
Great story so far. I just love the terror twins. They are two of my top favorite characters. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Update soon. Looking forward to it :) keep up the great work
| Autobot Mech-Ops chapter 15 . 1/3
| Spirit Kiss chapter 15 . 1/2
I suddenly really want to go outside and get a tan. To bad it's snowing and there's no sun out...
| Autobot Slipstream chapter 15 . 1/2
It was funny & sweet. Perfect.
| professionalemail101 chapter 14 . 11/27/2013
AWESOME! UPDATE SOOON!
| professionalemail101 chapter 8 . 11/27/2013
It's okay Chi. I like the twins too.
| professionalemail101 chapter 7 . 11/27/2013
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! THE TWINS GLITCHED!
| professionalemail101 chapter 6 . 11/27/2013
THIS CHAPTER IS EASILY ONE OF MY FAVORITES!
| professionalemail101 chapter 4 . 11/27/2013
Wow. Nice one Glade. You just HAD to put a damper on her mood, didn't cha?
| Autobot Slipstream chapter 13 . 7/17/2013
| Spirit Kiss chapter 14 . 6/17/2013
My mind is to happy but did you kill Ironhide in this story? I forgot... Anyways this is totally epic!
| cool chapter 14 . 6/12/2013
keep up the great work