Reviews for And the Last Shall Be First
Phoenix in Motion chapter 4 . 9/22/2002
you have an interesting style. I think more clarity in the unspoken "dialogue" (is that the right word? they were communicating but not speaking) might make it easier for some readers to follow, but personally, I like it the way it is.
chicketieboo chapter 4 . 6/29/2002
hey, AWSOME STORY! totally my concept too on what would of happened, lust last night i wrote alot of the exact same thing, i have to hand it to you, you are exceptional, if you have time, check mine out
HonorH chapter 1 . 6/28/2002
And may I say how nice it is to see a *non*-B/S post-S6 fic? This is wonderful, very Xander. I can see these things running through his mind as he runs to Willow. Excellent work with the dear boy.
Maggie C chapter 4 . 6/27/2002
Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you! This was such a sweet, good story and I really enjoyed it. :)