Reviews for Dirty Picture
InuKagTrueLove chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
It was fuckin awesome :-P
Darkshadowrose2 chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
love it
inuxkagome chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
oh oh oh!i like it :)
SweetChik73 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
For someone who doesnt write hentai your very good at it! Great story :)
DaBlackVegeta chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Well being your first hentai, I'd say it was decently written. I think the Hojo scene was rather unnesscary as was all the 'texting' speak (symbols like ;) and _ don't belong in stories). Also, you could have been a little more descriptive during the sex scene (example: Inuyasha just let Kagome do her stuff and he reached to touch her now wet vagina) What do you mean by 'stuff'? I wanna know, lol.

Anyway, good first try. I hope you continue to improve. Much love,

DaBlackVegeta
Jellybean-chan chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!?
You still are a horny bugger! _
darkemolover chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
i like it its pritty good for a first
alexischic chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
xD
No! You did amazing! xD
This was cute, sexy, and funny. Awesome job! :D
gotboredofthisonenotcomingback chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
well I just wanted to say well done on making this. it was really good.