Reviews for The next adventure part 2: the adventure continues
Guest chapter 60 . 7/17
Oye! Espero que actualices pronto porque es una muy buena historia está genial!
Guest chapter 60 . 7/16
Sería genial que el 59 y 60 estuvieran juntos,pero, están geniales. ;)
layton.bunch.9 chapter 1 . 1/1
Hello I love ur story plz contact me through here when u get a chance
ec chapter 56 . 7/23/2015
live anora as i told u live sorry i watch a funny scene at a hospital version of back of the barnyard
ec chapter 54 . 7/12/2015
Oh he almost killed his girlfriend I think he's going to save her life now!
Guest chapter 51 . 6/22/2015
Bad ass story
ec chapter 51 . 6/21/2015
Whoa gia must be stressed right now
ec chapter 49 . 6/9/2015
Wow this is bad the cubs had to fight clones of themselves
joshuab2897 chapter 48 . 5/27/2015
hey man if there is going to update please do it is a awesome story
ec chapter 48 . 3/15/2015
dr. blowhole made the clones
Divine Protector of Skyrim chapter 20 . 2/26/2015
19 and 20 would be better if they were together.
Divine Protector of Skyrim chapter 16 . 2/26/2015
Chapter 13 through 16 would make a great chapter, although, take out the last two sentences and then you would have a better cliffhanger at the end if this chapter.
Divine Protector of Skyrim chapter 11 . 2/26/2015
This chapter and chapter 10'would be better if it was one bigger chapter.
Divine Protector of Skyrim chapter 6 . 2/26/2015
I think you should go back over your writing and see what chapters could be combined into one, like this one and chapter 5 are a possibly, it would flow into each other easily.
Chris chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
I wood slap her back in the face
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