Reviews for Tell Me I'm A Wreck Alternate!
Arkosenn chapter 2 . 12/5/2013
this may be a little harsh, but your story seems very incoherent. Please do proofread the last chapter. Hidan, where did he drop into the narrative? a great start to a promising story otherwise.
Incongruous Legume chapter 3 . 8/7/2012
._. you didn't... you just ... MY LIMES ! XD anywhore, wow ._.
Tanukiskies chapter 3 . 8/7/2012
Sarcastic script chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
Super human strength hinata .. Kaaahahahaha! To the toilet you go neji... Hahahaha

Light giggles, I liked it. Let's see how much of a fool neji can be before relaying his feelings out to hinata, and why do
I get a feeling that this kiss in the next chapter not gonna be simple? Well write on dear writer, write on!

Happy writings,
The Clawed Butterfly chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
just kiss the girl already! XD
HyugaHimeSama chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
Woo yes! I like it! A little corny but I like corny :) the image if Hinata carrying Neji is a little funny lol.
Incongruous Legume chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
hehe ;D amazing as always ! ._. i wonder what neji is going to do -epic sarcasm-
Yui chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
It's great so far! Please upload the next chapter soon! :P