Reviews for Twelve
Sparrow Joy chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
This is one of the great fanfiction stories of momo and toshiro that I've read. It makes me cry :(
Krisaku chapter 13 . 6/24/2016
I friggin cried a bucket of tears, this is just so beautifully written, the pain, grief and love that they shared is just too much that it makes my heart aches. The theme of death as well makes me realized what life is all about. I am happy that you didn't partner toushiro to anyone at the end, I know i'm being bias to other pairing such as HitsuKarin but I just so love the story of HitsuHina , even in BLEACH. Please keep up the good work on your other written fanfictions specially HitsuHina fanfics, i just love them.
Stephsoo chapter 13 . 5/26/2016
Is the saddest...
and yet the most beautiful story...
I've ever read.
Nara Yasmin chapter 13 . 3/14/2016
Crueldade... Em 13 capítulos, conseguiu destroçar meu coração mais de uma vez e me prendeu na frente do pc o suficiente pra eu já estar atrasada pra aula e provavelmente vou chegar lá com olhos cheios de lágrimas (mas quem liga?)...
História linda e triste, conseguiu me cativar, e olha que eu sou chata e é muito difícil eu gostar de uma história ao ponto de mandar review.

Enfim, realmente amei a fic (embora tenha me feito chorar, malvada!). Continue assim!
Trillichu chapter 12 . 10/17/2015
FUUUUUUUU-you made this so sad I've got teary eyes. Can you like make a story with an alternate ending where momo lives or at least lives enough to tell him whatever she was going to say. Plus I've read this story like 5 times can you like not try and kill me with this ending. Great story *sniffle* *sobs* ;-; ~Trillichu
toshiroxmomo122 chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
Okay, well there's way more HitsuKarin in this than HitsuHina, and I stopped reading this short, and only skimmed through the chapters and the sweet scenes between Toshiro and Momo. Other than that I didn't really read the rest of it. I got to chapter twelve before I started sobbing. And that's exactly why I only skimmed it. I didn't want to get too attached to the storyline. But I guess I did. XD I wish I could read this through, but I just can't. It's too heartbreaking, but it was so beautifully written from what I could tell. Way more HitsuKarin than I was expecting though. Maybe you should put that in the summary so people know.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/24/2015
nooooo ! momo you could dieee :'(
whitealmond chapter 13 . 12/7/2014
I can only hope that I'll be able to write something that brings such joy and grief to my readers, as you've done with me. Thank you for writing this, it was beautiful.
whitealmond chapter 12 . 12/7/2014
You really stabbed me through the heart with this one
whitealmond chapter 11 . 12/7/2014
My heart is swimming in tears
whitealmond chapter 8 . 12/7/2014
Does hinamori have an actual disease? I'm curious.

Also, the story just keeps breaking my heart.
whitealmond chapter 7 . 12/7/2014
Oh my god I'm crying
whitealmond chapter 6 . 12/7/2014
My god, what drama. I'm torn between feeling angry at Momo for her selfishness and games and feeling incredibly sad for everyone.
whitealmond chapter 5 . 12/7/2014
Japanese emoticons are hilarious. And I love how you addressed my concerns regarding Momo taking advantage of Toushirou in this chapter ;) the hitsukarin in this is endearing, even though I'm a hitsuhina shipper all the way, lol
whitealmond chapter 4 . 12/7/2014
Whoa, I did not expect her to find out so soon. Love this fic!
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