Reviews for Forever e ever
ThatKid chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
I really liked your story, characters like the hand maidens need more attention. But you did have some grammar errors, you should check over your work more then once. Despite that, it was a rather interesting and entertaining story.
kwaiiChan-chan chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Your grammar is off throughout much of the story, but apart from that I love it! Another good read-through and you've got an awesome story!