Reviews for Disturbed Delirium
typicalRAinbow chapter 4 . 10/6/2012
Loving the trailer and blimey what a chapter! Glad Constance was found but such an intense turn of events! Worth the weight, have fun and take at uni :D
Nic Neptune chapter 3 . 10/6/2012
Ah, your review reminded me that I'd to read chapter 3! Totally behind in all fics! :P

Anyway, superb chapter! (but I would expect that from you. :P)

The flashback scene had an eerie vibe that was truly wonderful - I really got into the atmosphere of the story, which makes it tens of times more enjoyable! :)

The dynamic between Constance and Imogen was different to say the least, and an angle that I really, really liked! Clever take on it, and realistic as well, which is great to see. :) Shows the signs of an awesome writer. :D

Great chapter, keep up the good work! xxx
Guest chapter 3 . 10/4/2012
A CLASSIC.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/4/2012
WOW
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER.
ImpossiblePoet chapter 3 . 9/5/2012
I don't know how I've somehow not read this until now! Good story so far, I'm enjoying it- I'm very intrigued, though, please update soon! :D
Fairly Odd New Yorker chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
Sorry I haven't reviewed before, I'm terrible at keeping up with it. :P anyways I love this fic, great concept! I hope Constance gets her memory back soon.
DissectingPomegranates chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
I love this picture that you've created for this fic! *two thumbs up* it's classic!
Awww thanks for the cookies...but it was just ping pong, was glad to have helped! God knows you've done the same for me ;)

Flashback was eerie to say the least *shivers*

It was refreshing to read a tender and almost pitiful conversation/scene between Imogen and Constance as we already know their usual fragile alliance but in this situation Imogen, I can tell will be a dependable crutch and a source of towering strength during this confusing time for HB!

Think Imogen did need to 'vent' (God knows we've all did that with strangers) and Eleanor seemed to help!
;)

DP x
Nic Neptune chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
And another great chapter! Cannot wait for the next update!

Great emotions throughout. You really know how to pluck the heartstrings of the reader, don't you?!

Thank you for providing us with a great fic,

Nic. xXx
typicalRAinbow chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
Crikey Ms Newt. A crazy frightening clever fantastic start, remnd me to double your cookie rations ;)
Nic Neptune chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Really, really interesting chapter! Great start to a will-be great story!

Fantastic descriptions and dialogue. Impressive characterisation also! Can't wait to see where this is going!

Thanks for posting! :D
Duchene-fan chapter 2 . 8/17/2012
Poor, poor Constance!
Great start to this fic, thank you.
Aleksandra Hardbroom chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
Well that was interesting to read about constance wanting water and makes rain inside umm...
Wonder how long will it take for Constance's memory come back?
A very good story can't wait for the next chapter.
DissectingPomegranates chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
*Yeeeey for cookies*
I would've left a review but close to 3am...bed was calling.

Well, well, well...where to begin?

Poor Amelia :(
Constance appears to be the same but the damage is all internal, the fratured memories and power...everything had made Constance the witch she was gone and now replaced by someone that would be Constance' poloar opposite

I thought the scene where Davina was singing while knitting was sweet before a can of worms got opened, poor Davina.

The ending/interaction between Amelia and Constance is always facinating to read but don't think we've had them in this scenario before. Pulling on the heart strings when Constance pushed Amelia away :( And now seemingly giving up...

Fabulous work as usual!

DP x
SweetlyMagnifique chapter 2 . 7/31/2012
Ooh this is going to be good! It really is a crazy and wonderful thought that Constance, who's life is based around her magic, denies its existance! This was really well written so bravo to you for that. I really liked the dream/memory and the part when Davina was singing the school song and Constance remembered it. I also really liked the interaction with Amilia at the end too, although it wasn't mother/daughter stuff, I think it's exactly how Constance would have reacted to the situation, especially since the trauma of the accident and the memory loss would have made her a bit more emotional :) Well done anyway! I really can't wait for more!
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