Reviews for No Better Assassin
jameson1155 chapter 10 . 4/3
I was so loving this, I really admire your writing. Merlin has been gone for such a long time, but I still love reading the fan fiction. I do hope you someday revisit this and continue to write All that wonderful story telling shouldn't end in limbo!
spinnerofdark chapter 10 . 12/12/2016
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thebicky chapter 10 . 11/8/2016
Good fic! Seems incomplete tho :(
Lolxxx chapter 10 . 6/30/2016
I don't suppose that after 4 years of silence your muse might return and allow you to continue this? No? Drat. I'd hoped. Great story btw
ARTs Ninja Pal chapter 10 . 1/11/2016
I wish this would update (or that I had checked the last updated date before I had started reading) but either way I love this so damn much. So so good. Ah well, love it. NINJA
Guest chapter 10 . 12/2/2015
y u stop :(
Evil intent chapter 10 . 11/14/2015
Wait- what? No. No no no no no. That can not be the end. It isn't the end right? Please say there's a sequel. Seriously this is freaking AMAZING and therefore it is too good to end. Amazing just amazing!
oma13 chapter 10 . 10/21/2015
Seriously? This is so good and you're not going to finish it? Please don't leave us hanging.
FudoTwin17 chapter 10 . 9/8/2015
Holy crap. I'm addicted to this story. Update for me?
A Smiling Cat chapter 10 . 8/26/2015
Hello, I hope you're still around ... because this is a a really good story !
I love that Arthur is not totally blind and Gwaine not totally stupid. It's nicely written and your characters are all great.
Please don't leave us hanging like that ! I'd love to read Arthur's reaction to that information, then to Merlin's enchantment and to his magic...
mizzymel chapter 10 . 5/27/2015
GAH! I just realized you haven't updated this since 2012. I think I'm going to cry.
AllieOfGreenGables chapter 10 . 2/3/2015
I wish there were more of this! It's fantastic! Thanks for writing!
OnceaSuperWhoLockian chapter 10 . 1/18/2015
GAH! This story is so brilliant! I love your reworking of this episode with more emotion and revelations than the original. I always wondered how no-one really noticed that Merlin was so different. I can't even begin to describe how much I love how your slowly having the characters (particularly Arthur and Gwaine) learn Merlin's secrets and how much he has done for them. I know you haven't updated this story in forever but I am reviewing in the hope that maybe I can inspire or shame you into writing more as soon as possible since I am DYING over here! You are a brilliant writer and story teller and you NEED to update this!

BreathingMagic chapter 10 . 1/17/2015
Sorry, sorry, excuse me for a Minute, sorry, thank you... *shuffles through the crowd and out the door*


Phew. Okay. Breathe. Sorry, but I think I'll never get used to this. Why is it that I stumble across all these creative, beautifully written and absolutely intriguing stories only to find them abandoned - with YEARS since the last time they've been updated! It's just SO frustrating, especially when there seems to be no reason for it, no Explanation. When the author's note is already excited (and therefor making me excited) for what is yet to come, for getting into the meat of things. And then there's nothing. Well, nothing and a freaking cliffhanger, in this case. -.-

So here I go again. Writing, Reviewing. Begging for continuation. Hoping. Praying. So that maybe, just maybe, through some great, Merlinian miracle, brilliant writers like yourself will be drawn back to this, kissed by muse and will be more than just a Little motivated to Keep things going. In the end, as Long as there is hope, there might also be a Chance...

Suffice to say that I have a love-hate-relationship with this. I loved absolutely everything about it so far, but I obviously hate that yet again I am left with a door halfway opened, but I can't get through it to examine the Beauty that hides behing it more thoroughly. And I was so excited to see Merlin's struggle against Fomorrah-Merlin and all that... :(
Lilac Winters21 chapter 10 . 1/15/2015
I love this story! You fixed a lot of the things that I disliked about the original episode, and I am really enjoying this version of it. Morgana's discovery of Merlin's magic, the two different parts of Merlin struggling internally, Merlin watching his inner self helplessly-all brilliantly written. Please, please, please write more for this story; it's been wonderful so far, and I really want to know what happens!
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