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The Phoenix Ninja101 chapter 1 . 2/17
Please update?
Aira Aura chapter 14 . 11/7/2015
Continue please
Guest chapter 14 . 9/14/2014
i like the story idea very much. i hope you can update again soon. ps. is there any chance for a happy ending in this, can you tell us? because finding out saya was still alive in this one makes me think this might just maybe have a happy ending. or a really sad one one where train and saya do a role reversal and She watches as He dies. either way, very well written overall.
xXHumptyDumptyXx chapter 14 . 7/23/2014
This chapter was climactic for me.

Please, please... *whimpers quietly*

Anyway... good job getting the chapter in a while back. I've been neglecting to read my Favorited stories... ehehehe.
D. Haiiro no otoko chapter 14 . 7/6/2014
Please update! Love your story.
brendatorres113 chapter 14 . 6/25/2014
Wow your fanfiction was awesome! Can't wait to read your next chapter hope you upload soon xD
Damian 'Robin' Wayne chapter 14 . 3/8/2014
Train isn't... dead... right...?
Time Review chapter 14 . 3/5/2014
Sarah did it! She got Train out and rescued Saya! Creed's not dead! Echidna's plan was genious! Sven and Eve were idiots! The next chapter's not out yet!


Ahem! Aaanyway...

Heh heh, I knew Subditus was a weird word and must have some meaning I didn't know, but I thought I just didn't get it 'cause I only watched the anime once (The manga's better! ...Don't look at me like that...). I should have looked it up anyway :) . I toootally didn't even suspect he was Zagine's brother.

And Saya's awakening threw me off, too...and the fact that she was alive in the first place, although the thought might have crossed my mind when Sarah was talking to her. When she came back to say she couldn't come talk to Saya, I just knew the "coma patient" was important...I just kept forgetting she existed.

I can't help but keep wondering how Train broke the bars on the windows in his second escape attempt. Did I miss something and the bars weren't solid metal, or did Train have superhuman strength in the anime? I should probably watch it again...

Creed threw me off. I kept thinking it was a dream someone was having. He came out of nowhere! Hee hee, I bet he knew right off what "Subditus" means. That's probably what told him for sure that the man was a fake.

An hour. That's all it took for Creed to know Train was in danger. Sven and Eve should take notes...especially Sven, 'cause Eve's still a child.

Gasp! Oooh, I just thought of something. I thought for sure it was Sarah who saved Train, but now I think it could have been Creed! He somehow made it look like he died (perhaps a clone? He's good at weird stuff like that) and then left, or was gone already, and rescued Train when no one was looking. Hee hee, I'm so smart...or I'm just weird. I'm okay with either one ;)

Heh, one would think Creed was my favorite with how much praise I'm giving him.


It's Train, just so you know.

I hope Saya doesn't die with the injuries she gave herself just trying to get to Train. The breaking bones and tearing tissue (or muscle, I forget which) thing had me cringing the more she moved. "Train! I'm here to rescue you! Uh oh, I see the tunnel...such a pretty light..." Ahahaha! Eh heh, er... I like it :)

The story, I mean. Not my fanscene. I look forward to the next chapter!

Time R.
Vertero chapter 14 . 1/26/2014
Nice chapter, update soon!
SoExtra chapter 14 . 1/20/2014
This is really good! plz keep writing! Did you really kill train? I'd be so sad...that's why you got to keep writing, Your cliff hangers are murderous! You got my support! ;)
JennieJane chapter 14 . 1/3/2014
Oh my God! Echidna is now officially one of my favorite characters! XD Did Eve want to say something but the others wouldn't listen to her? And what happened to the insane doctor at the end? I really want to know what's happening with that doctor and if he's immortal or something? :P PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
PS: The time this time was good ;) keep up the good work :)
lunardusk chapter 14 . 1/4/2014
Poison lipstick. That's certainly a new one. This is good. Reading about Train falling apart was a little hard, but this is definitely an interesting story.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/14/2013
R u done with exams now? You last updated on November 26! Will you write a new chapter now? Love the story!
Yokomi chapter 13 . 12/12/2013
that was awesome! it was definitely worth the wait! why isn't Sven's eyes working? What will happen next? CAN'T WAIT! UPDATE SOON!
xXHumptyDumptyXx chapter 13 . 12/11/2013
Two reviews, I've made TWO REVIEWS. and guess what? your. one. of. them!
I'm only going to say this ONCE, ONCE! ...
Update the resolution, please if you don't mind. *hands you a cookie*
Now anyway with all due seriousness.
This story is DEPRESSING, not that I "don't" like Depressing stories. But it is AMAZING. The story has the right concepts and writing patterns with the LONG Chapters and cliffhangers leaving you CRAVING more! So keep up the good work! and make sure to throw a rainbow of happiness somewhere in between. *shivers*
I swear on my 'Gummybear oath' that you will continue this STORY! :D *salutes a farewell*
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