|Reviews for Into the Abyss|
| Kips34 chapter 12 . 8/16/2016
I have read a few stories like this one that various authors have written in response to the episode Demonology, and I'm not usually a fan of them. But this story was truly moving. I like how skeptical the team was in the beginning, and how no one, not even Rossi, immediately jumped to the conclusion that their was something supernatural at work until every other logical possibility had been eliminated. And the way the team rallied around Emily was beautiful, and very true to the nature of the characters. I feel like this plotline has a lot of potential for changing the Valhalla/Lauren storyline from the original series. If you are ever inclined to write a sequel to this story, it will definitely be one I want to read. Thank you as always for sharing your writing with all of us. I look forward to exploring more of your work in the future.
| miles from where you are chapter 12 . 10/10/2015
update: it is now 4 a.m., and i actually had enough balls to finish this story despite how late it was. and i don't regret it at all. you, my friend, did an amazing job on this! as much as i wish i could be able to write a piece of work like this, i think i'll just leave it to the professionals like you lol. but seriously, i aspire to be able to write this well someday.
| miles from where you are chapter 3 . 10/9/2015
considering the fact that it's going on 2 a.m. here, i'm not so sure that this was the smartest thing for me to read at the moment lol. however, i love the genre horror, so i'm really looking foward to finishing this fic (no matter how dark and eerie it is) and finding out what the HELL is going on with emily.
| hotchisbea chapter 10 . 7/7/2015
you wrote the demon was pazuzu mate of lamashtu so the demon should still be in there because they extrusized lamashtu not pazuzu
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/28/2014
I loved it. I really liked how you described the way she felt when she was in Hell, how you went into death with her experiences there. Thank you for sharing your fic I really enjoyed it :)
| Mn chapter 12 . 6/12/2014
Simply horrifically wonderful! I was glued to my screen through a 12-hour workday every second I got!
| RealMe07 chapter 12 . 9/12/2013
This was seriously amazing! Such a great read! I continue to be astounded by your fabulous writing...
| rollingcactus chapter 12 . 3/29/2013
Wow. I normally don't read horror fics because of a bad experience with a horror novel when I was younger but I really enjoyed that. But of course I saw it was another story by you and I didn't even look at the genres. I'm not big in to religion but I liked the premise of the story. I also found it funny (probably not the right word...) that demon was quite sexual in it's tormenting of the team but I'm glad glad the exorcism worked in Emily's favour. Also the team moment at the end where they all band together is adorable.
| Graveygraves chapter 12 . 11/28/2012
Sorry it has taken me so long to catch up on this, I have literally spent today reading the last half of this and think you have done an amazing job. Brilliant work and I look forward to more of your work.
| Cue.Mysterious.Music.Rite.Now chapter 12 . 11/16/2012
I have to admit, this story definitely belongs in the horror category. My lights are on and may never go off.
| Liz chapter 12 . 11/13/2012
This story was really different and not something I would normally read. While there were some parts that were hard to read I did enjoy it. I love all of your stories and would not have read a story about possession written by anyone else. It was believable and took me on an emotional roller coaster. Sorry to hear that rl hasn't been that great for you lately but I hope things look up for you soon. Anyway great story and I'm looking forward to the next one you write :)
| lizzabet chapter 12 . 11/9/2012
Amazing ending to an amazing story! Can't wait to see what you'll do next!:D
| No.13Baby chapter 12 . 11/7/2012
This was a fantastic way to end it! The dialogue, the toast, the quote, everything... and I just loved the albatross part. Honestly, I don't think it came across as too preachy at all, and I'm usually very easily turned off by that sort of thing. I thought it communicated exactly what you said you wanted it to and was all very in character. Well done!
| radioactive460 chapter 12 . 11/6/2012
A great ending to another great story. I loved Emily's thoughts about her morally gray past and how little the team really knows her. And the support the team showed Emily during her recovery was very touching. I'm sad it's over, but I look forward to reading what you have in store for us next!
P.S. Kudos for the X-Files quote. :)
| MidnightHalcyon chapter 12 . 11/6/2012
Awesome story, very spiritual.