Reviews for The Dream
Guest chapter 6 . 3/17
im confused
Guest chapter 5 . 3/17
you do relise alaric is a real name
Guest chapter 5 . 3/17
nooooo you made my life sad it should be arem not alaric
YugiKitten chapter 7 . 2/16
Actually a little more realistic would be for Yami to ask where Yugi got the address then realize that maybe from his school since he got it wrong.
LocLove the storu so far though
yu-gi-ohlove3 chapter 15 . 2/8
that was so sad and cool and so many emotion's I cried through most of the story because it was so sad at time's great story you should make like a sequel to this story but like I said great story it made me laugh it made me cry :3 good
jeannierac chapter 8 . 12/11/2013
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Deadly Shadow chapter 3 . 2/19/2013
Misty "What the heck?!"
Kira "No comment..."
Angel "Wow... Uhm do the out thing..."
Misty "The Dark Passions out... Now lets read!"
RedRosePetal chapter 15 . 2/13/2013
N'aw sad :( Poor Atem!

Great Job on the story I have really enjoyed this!
I am acutally going to favourite this, yeah there's a few minor mistakes here and there but hey I do the same thing. I have enjoyed the direction this story went so YAY! :D
lilyflower666 chapter 15 . 2/13/2013
two chapters in two days, that's amazing, and kinda sad, cause now this story is over. ah, well i enjoyed reading it while it lasted. Midnight
RedRosePetal chapter 14 . 2/12/2013
-.- What is it with you and ending it by when the excitement builds! -.- XD

Update Soon!
lilyflower666 chapter 13 . 2/10/2013
that cliffy is positively criminal, but hey it keeps the readers coming back right?
RedRosePetal chapter 13 . 2/10/2013
Oh. Why! Bu- I- You- Wha- I HATE YOU! (JK) Why end it there! WHY! WAAAAAAH!

RedRosePetal chapter 12 . 2/2/2013
Why would you end it there. Meany. Wah.

Update Soon!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/11/2013
This is pretty good, keep it up!
And as for to much angst, well these are heavy situations.
There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but the most noticeable is the absence of a question mark, you've just put a full stop or exclamation point.
I like the plot, it's intriguing - all though I though Mana and Mahad were shadow creatures at first(because they can shape-shift and all)
fictionfanat chapter 10 . 1/9/2013
Wow that was really unexpected... I love this story is great!

Hope u update it soon!
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