Reviews for Unfaithful
wardlyman chapter 10 . 1/29/2015
Welp, not I can stop reading this trash.
pauleen chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
This is interesting so far.
TickleMyTweet chapter 12 . 1/30/2013
Don't worry, I still like you!
Red Reaper88 chapter 12 . 1/31/2013
amazing job!
Guest chapter 12 . 1/29/2013
Hey Ashley
I read your opening comments with surprise. how could anyone reading this story seriously expect it to be a happy ever after love story?
I enjoy a feel good story as much as the next person, but sometimes a tale that is closer to real life as a refreshing change.
I was surprised and not with Bell's diagnosis, it was obvious all the way through that she a had a problem which Edward copped the brunt of.
I was disappointed to discover that he had an affair but living with he shrew that Bella had become, it was understandable, a new job, new people and an escape from his home life. It happens. Often..And for her to push him so far.. To violence and suicide? or maybe that is who he was all long.
We will never know but you know what? You've got me thinking. isn't that what it is
all about when you submit a story to be read by all and sundry.
So I say thank you and congratulations on a story that although you struggled with it was/is a good tale which got me in and invested.
And to those who were disappointed it wasn't more of a romance... There are plenty of them out there, go find one and don't bash a story that is a bit different.
maleenaangel chapter 12 . 1/30/2013
I definitely didn't hate it. It's amazing! Great plot too! You're right you know, some people care more for the romance and sex then they do the background and story line. Even I am a very devoted Jacob and Bella girl, I really enjoyed this story.

I'm not a fan of Edward/Bella (at all), but I like the story too much to hate. :) however, It does not change my opinion of Edward and Bella together. Sorry, but Jake and Bells for eternity!

Other reviewers have no right to flame because having a plot and story line is what makes the story good, and you did exactly that. :D you suprised me every step of the way, and with every chapter. The story was realistic and dealt with real human situations. Thank you so much for writing this!

I hope to read more from you. :-)

Maleena xxxx

And can I say, what a perfect ending too. :D
Taino Delsan13 chapter 12 . 1/29/2013
It's a bittersweet ending but i luv she still got a some light after the dark tunnel. Great job can't wait for another story if u r making one until nex time
withlovej chapter 10 . 1/28/2013
Alright, I already left a review for the last chapter, so I went back to this one and am going to leave my Ch. 12 review for this chapter. FF won't let me review a chapter twice.

Anyway, just finished the chapter—and I guess the story if you aren't going to continue, which if you change your mind, I'll support—and loved every word of it. It wasn't at all bad or whatever you might think. That was a beautiful ending, especially for coming to an end abruptly. Nessie was a cute surprise (first story where I haven't wanted to hate her—that includes the original Twilight) and so was Jacob and Bella staying in touch. I don't know why, but I felt they may not. It was nice surprise, though. Loved that he's the god father.

Truly loved the story! Hope you have others for which I get to leave incredibly long reviews!
FlowerPower21 chapter 12 . 1/28/2013
Awww! I think that was a good end!
withlovej chapter 12 . 1/28/2013
I haven't even read the chapter yet, but I'm going to review first. I'm sorry you've gotten so many negative reviews! I mean, I was confused, but I still wanted to see how everything turned out! I love drama and intense stories, but to each his own, yeah? Anyway, I would love for you to continue and see where it goes. I agree that it could be either Bella and Jacob or just Bella. Even Bella and Edward… but he's dead, so maybe not. Still, whatever you do, I offer only words of love and adoration for the story and your choosing to try to do it justice. So far, so great. Glad I could offer some support. Good luck!
Guest chapter 11 . 1/24/2013
can you please not tag this as an edward and bella story? it isn't, and never was, an E&B story. it's really not ok to lie, to get people to read and review. it's not the fault of e/b shipper that no one cares about jake and bella. please change it to j/b.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/24/2013
I feel cheated. You pull this story under E/B as a couple. I love them together and I dont want to read about how great Jacob is and about him and Bella.
If you want for Bella to be with Jacobm it's your right. But you should at leat warn readers. Pull your story under different category.
Red Reaper88 chapter 11 . 1/25/2013
love it. update soon
Taino Delsan13 chapter 11 . 1/23/2013
I kind of feel bad for Jake But not much because S***** people get s***** things happen to them. That's for Bella I think it's guilt, Even if she tried to do everything To stop them from killing himself. She felt like she still What is responsible. Oh what do what dr Carlisle will say she have? Will Rosalie coming back to him? Wonder what next for Jacob n Bella?
EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen chapter 11 . 1/23/2013
Damn you please move your crap shit out Bella and Edward you heartless. Damn you move this story to ugly nasty stinky dickKJacob and Bella section so Edward/Bella fand don't have to read your shit story.
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