|Reviews for Loss of Faith|
| FateOblivion chapter 19 . 2/13
Why is she... acting... NICE...
END OF THE WOOOOOOORLD! NOOOOO...
*coughs* anyways, this chapter seems nice except the sudden skip of the battle... why don't you try writing battle scenes bit by bit.. remember, it takes a lot of times of practice! you just need the TIME,DETERMINATION, AND INSPIRATION! (same goes for drawing :3) I wish you good luck.. :D
| Yuufa-san chapter 19 . 2/11
Like the previous one, I also liked this chapter. It's funny how everyone is thinking the worst when it comes to Lucifer, but then again, it's also not surprising, given what happened so far. I also find it really good that Hibari is one of the few people that aren't distrustful towards her - even a person like Lucifer needs one or two individuums where she doesn't feel like people want to stab her back in each moment. When it came to the bracelet... well, it broke my heart. I mean, the poor team. Now I just ask myself whenever you're going to let him live in the end like in God Eater Burst or if he stays dead. Of course I'd be delighted to see him back again like in the game, but in the end, it's your story, so I just gotta keep my hope up, right?
I'm just curious how Lucifer's plan will unfold and what exactly she did plan. Here and there were a few hints, but sadly, I forgot most of them already - I should really read the story through once again.
Oh and the preview is interesting - I wonder what Lucifer will do with that gun? Or more like, whom is she out to threaten or even kill? Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Yuufa-san chapter 18 . 1/27
Things are getting more and more interesting! Now that I own God Eater (though I haven't played it totally through yet), I can comment better on things overall. I have to say that I like the dynamics between Lucifer and the rest of the team. Or just everyone she interacts with, really, it's always interesting to see how things are turning out. I really liked the part where Lucifer is at Kota's home and simply enjoys life. It was so funny when Kota was despairing, even though this time, Lucifer hadn't even had any ill intents.
I can't wait to see what might happen next!
| FateOblivion chapter 17 . 1/10
This is getting exciting...
I like how you write... continue more... oh... and get well soon... if you're still unwell
| jhellou chapter 16 . 11/26/2013
i hope she'll be okay
| Zrye13 chapter 16 . 11/25/2013
I have made a new game with a character named Lucifer after your character xD
| FateOblivion chapter 15 . 10/29/2013
Nice update :)) aaaaand could you write a long bloody fighting scene with a leveled up insanity? Pleeeeease please pretty please :))
| jhellou chapter 12 . 9/14/2013
this is gonna be good! :D
| FateOblivion chapter 10 . 8/28/2013
| Zrye13 chapter 10 . 8/20/2013
Lucifer is the best OC ever xD
(even if she is kind of a dick *shot*)
| jhellou chapter 9 . 8/18/2013
she is a demon! eekk!
| P-and-P chapter 9 . 8/17/2013
when will you update again?
| Zrye13 chapter 8 . 8/8/2013
Looking forward to more :D
| Zrye13 chapter 6 . 8/8/2013
Oh my god I completely forgot about this story I'm so sorry! Dx
| DragonXDelinquent chapter 5 . 8/1/2013
Cold Devil? Caligula?