|Reviews for Chasing the Sun|
| Satan Abraham chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Oh... That was really good... I enjoyed it. :)
| crowlow chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
What struck me about this was how intriguingly HUMAN (I don't want to use caps but I'm not sure how to italicize on this site, haha) you made Aizen by giving him nightmares. Then Starrk went and said it himself! XD You've given him such a tenderness - with a touch of awe - regarding Aizen, that I'm really curious now to see more of how you view their relationship. I'd especially love to see something from Aizen's point of view! I'm dying to know how he views/feels about Starrk in turn.
Also, I don't think the first person sucked at all! I've written a lot in first person and never really thought much about it, but it seems to be a style that many are uncomfortable with? But I think yours reads smoothly, so I wouldn't worry about that. :) This was a really nice, much-needed addition to the lacking StAizen ship! Thank you for writing it!