Reviews for A bit of a shock
Gubefan1980 chapter 56 . 12/20/2016
This was a nice sweet chapter. Loved the boys getting off, and puttig his sister in her place. Seriously, sex, in his bed, thsts just rude. You did fine with Thanksgiving. Timing was a bit off, a family of that size would probably have a 20;25 lb birs, so the turkey would most likely go in the oven before they left for the parsdw. Interesting aside, I discovered that Thanksgiving is celebrated in Canada ad well as USA, although more logically in Oct after the harvest. Its also celebrated in some Caribbean nations as well as you did fine w
Gubefan1980 chapter 54 . 12/19/2016
So sad, poignant, yet ultimately very sweet. Poor kid never gives himself any credit for anything
Gubefan1980 chapter 53 . 12/19/2016
Very sweet cute chapter, although it's sad that Spencer still doesn't quite trust Derek to stay with him. Sorry to disagree, but Rossi was a Sgt Major in the Marines. He wasn't a NAVY SEAL, And as far as his last name, that is an unfortunate leftover from the American slave era. Usually slaves were given the last name of their owners. Alex Haley, author of the book Roots, had an African ancestor named Kunte Kinte. I forget what his first name was changed to but Haley was the last name of his ancestor's owner. Morgan as a last name mostly dates from a 14th century Welsh family meaning
Gubefan1980 chapter 51 . 12/19/2016
Well fighting makes it more realistic. I always wonder about coup├ęs who say they never fight. No couple ever agrees on every single thing in their relationship. And Spencer is not only wrong, he even defied the doctor's specific orders
Gubefan1980 chapter 50 . 12/19/2016
What a dick, no I'm not an Ethan fan either what a creep, and what's he doing at the BAU? Glad Spencer stood up for himself.
Gubefan1980 chapter 48 . 12/18/2016
That was smexy, very sweet. Glad Frank left, as I'm sure he Is too. I remember that Nathan case very tragic I agree about Liam, nice name, but if he look more African American than white he may be teased. Mercilessly.
Gubefan1980 chapter 45 . 12/18/2016
That's very cute, although I did figure that out ahead of time. I was going to mention IL and it is supposed to be a crime scene. Not sure how they'd pick up IN plates since you have to be a resident of a state to apply for tags however, we'll suspend disbelief for the sake of the story.
Gubefan1980 chapter 39 . 12/18/2016
Great for Derek and this new opportunity. And glad he has the supports of his lads as you Brits say. Lol
Gubefan1980 chapter 38 . 12/18/2016
That was cute and sweet and I love that Hotch called Derek. Kind of surprised that Spencer questioned "the two most important people" I'm pretty sure Derek already told him he was in it for Spencer and the baby. Kind of sad, but also disconcerting that Spencer still has doubts about Derek's loyalty. Hey, go Frank, you rock. Great chapter, lucky he's pregant though because Spencer needs to be smacked up side the head. Love Clooney, he thinks Derek is hiding Spencer.
Gubefan1980 chapter 35 . 12/18/2016
Awww, sweet chapter, and nice realization for Derek
Gubefan1980 chapter 34 . 12/18/2016
Poor Derek thinks he's unlovable, that he's broken and not deserving of love. Sex scene was smexy but full of adoration for each other. I love Morgan's inner dialogue, and then his shock "where the fuck did that come from?" So goofy boy doesn't recognize that they are soul mates.
Gubefan1980 chapter 33 . 12/18/2016
, I remember that poor Derek, to have his past brought up like that. And that asshole knows nothing about Derek's past relationships. Probably a maried man who hates his wife and jealous of what he thinks he knows about Derek
Gubefan1980 chapter 32 . 12/18/2016
Very cute chapter, I liked the DPOV especially the one about years, "fuck. Too late" snd the near the end "Smart ass" very well done
Gubefan1980 chapter 31 . 12/18/2016
Love the scenes with Spencer and Clooney, I like pit bulls, and it's true, the problem with them is the human on the other end of the leash. Good boy Clooney, take care of Spencer and the baby
Gubefan1980 chapter 30 . 12/18/2016
Love the chapter, poor Reid on a commercial jet, interesting to see the difference between British and American English spelling as well as words. For some reason, which I could find out if I wasn't lazy, lol, "we" dropped the U in words like favorite, flats are apartments, we no longer use chiropodist, we call foot doctors podiatrists (I asked my podiatrist what the difference is, but I forget what he told me) we also dropped the O in fetus, and the A in pediatrics. We call pubs bars or sometimes taprooms, the word pub may be used especially as a name for a bar that has a UK feel to it, eg Irish Pub. Of course there are other examples, gas for petrol, truck for lorry, A buiscit is doughy concoction often served as an alternative to a dinner roll. I enjoy reading English cosies and trying to decipher definition when I cone across word different from American English usage. Great chapter, can't wait for Morgan family to meet Spencer
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