|Reviews for A bit of a shock|
| Kitsune Spyk chapter 30 . 5/28
I like that it's not rushed, I always feel like I missed something if the story is rushed...
| Kitsune Spyk chapter 9 . 5/27
The irony is so thick I'm f-ing drowning... I really like the story so far... even if I am cursing the circumstances.
| Mayflowers123 chapter 42 . 3/8
Ha! The smallest of my siblings was my brother at 9lbs 3oz and I personally was 11lbs.
| LadyJanewriter chapter 68 . 12/3/2015
But i stuck itbout till the end amd i am so sad to see this story end. I think the way you portrayed the characters was absolutly perfect. You are ab amzing writing and kept me captivat3d
| Gubefan1980 chapter 34 . 8/21/2015
Geez I forgot this is 64 chapters long, it's after midnight on this side of the pond, although I know it's early morning for you. Great chapter, sexy story, glad they got it all out, great so far, I really enjoyed this at the first go round. And the second and now the third but I have to get some sleep.
| Gube1980 chapter 33 . 8/21/2015
wow I thought this was another confrontation, I thought it was a story with some slutty women who were ridiculing Derek, this is upsetting, but Spencer had to find out.
| Gubefan1980 chapter 27 . 8/21/2015
That was great, I hate the way they grill him, nice time coming up I hope, all that whining geez.
| Gubefan1980 chapter 25 . 8/21/2015
Wow that was so cute, I loved the kiss "thing" that was so Spencer what a rotten life he has had
| Gubefan1980 chapter 22 . 8/21/2015
aww that was so sweet, and I think I remember what happened to hotel reservations, hoo ha. Glad baby daddy is happy. though of course I knew that already
| Gubefan1980 chapter 21 . 8/21/2015
Awww I forgot that Derek slept over, can't wait for next chapter, this is so good, yes I'm reading for third time and glad to be able to comment.
| Gubefan1980 chapter 20 . 8/21/2015
Wowee, loved this chapter, I'm not and never will be a fan of Garcia, I just don't like her at all, but glad that we got that out of the way. I can't recall if
Derek gets on the BAU or not.
| Gubefan1980 chapter 18 . 8/21/2015
I love this chapter, well now poor Derek has to face Des, "makes face, what a bitch"
| Gubefan1980 chapter 17 . 8/21/2015
awww that was a sweet chapter, love how Derek steps up to the plate immediately.
| Gubefan1980 chapter 16 . 8/21/2015
My poor boys, victims of this vicious writer's sorry ass "sense of humor" no that was good, loved the suspense, and that made it so realistic, Derek having those "wet dreams" although poor Spencer being all alone, and of course I know what comes next with Des
| Gubefan1980 chapter 14 . 8/21/2015
/at first I didn't want to read mpreg, then I realized that was no more unrealistic as the writers actually allowing them to be a couple on the show, and it's been fun. Spencer stood up for himself, you go girl, love his snappy comebacks.