Reviews for Essay Assignment
Guest chapter 6 . 4/24/2014
wow, this makes me hate america/alfred so much lol (in this story i mean), which i assume is the point. I want to find out where this is going though, update soon!
liechtybakaribbon chapter 6 . 7/27/2013
... "Ludwig" is a very tolerant principal...
TailedKitsune chapter 6 . 6/2/2013
Glob! I totally wanna kill Alfred...but I like it somehow. Please tell me that the chapter where he's gonna reliaze his such a dumbass is coming soon. Good luck and awesome
addledwalrus chapter 6 . 6/2/2013
Woah, Alfred really is a jerk in this story...
Rosariorouge chapter 5 . 5/30/2013
Damn America this is too funny XD
CoffeeKitty chapter 3 . 5/25/2013
I love this story! Alfred acts like such a prick but its kinda cool because from the other fanfics i've read it kinda focuses on different aspects of his personality. I cant wait till next chapter I wonder how everyone will react. :)
TiggerMusica chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Love it.
Its funny, has good plot, and its well written.
Ill have to put this into my fav. next time i log in.
Cant wait to see another chapter.
MDWOLFGIRL chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
I rely like how you had all of the chacaters. Idk what about it i like, i just do.
LittlePrincessKK chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
I love it! Just love it! Sweetheart, this is a good story already! And you published it on my friend's birthday too! Good thing I happen to like being awake at 1:05 in the morning. Alfred actually made me do a really fast facepalm! Best story ever! GAH! I'm so happy! Can't you tell? Anyways, I'm going to go scream my happiness to the world via pillow. And then probably play HetaOni during a thunderstorm, which means I will be going against my common sense that says I will be even more freaked out by Steve. Adieu!
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Let's see, Al has found comfort in...

Iggy - He's not letting Alfred fail

Yetkaterina - Alfred was looking at her... Huge tracts of land. XD

That one kid - I mean, Mattie - He's trying to help Al.

Al could write about any of those people.

Or, he could write about Ronald McDonald, since Alfred finds comfort at McDonald's. XD