|Reviews for Take me to the Ball game|
| MoonlitShadowsoftheHumanSoul chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Made no sense, whatsoever. And, I think the phrase is 'take me out to the ball game'. Also, quotation marks get punctuation, you need soelling.
| DaisyDay chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Awww, RR, that was sooo cute! I'm one who thought the baseball hitting Mike in the head would've only ADDED to the story! I LOVED this!
| canterlevi chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Oh, if only...! :-) But just a couple of Ameri-picks: 'sweater' instead of jumper, and 'napkin' instead of serviette. I say this only because i've seen some Doctor Who fans get unpleasant and downright hostile when American fic writers use the wrong word. I have no reason to believe anyone here is like that, but ya never know...I don't mind particularly -it only throws me off for a second, but then it's all good. Yummy good, that is.
| theSilverChef chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Very cute! Thank you, kiss cam!