Reviews for Your Eyes, They Kill The Music
SuperValeWhoStuck4Life chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
So sweet!
Being A Wallflower chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
As usual, pretty! Shall I just gush about you in all my reviews? Probably.

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I hope that didn't hurt your eyes too much, my dear. I loved it! Xxx
DobbyLovesSocks chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
That was really, really sweet. An interesting take on that pairing, and I really enjoyed it. Great job!
hexgirlfriend chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
THIS. Dear God, I love this!
our dancing days chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Oh.

Somehow, you have made me fall in love with Draco and Astoria all over again. I usually have the idea that they're betrothed, made to marry, but they kind of fall in love after having to survive everything that their parents and the war put them through. But this was just such a sweet way of showing us that Draco has changed and Astoria isn't like all the other nasty little pureblood girls. I play the piano too, so missing the music really hit a chord with me. (gettit? :D) This was a beautiful piece.
weasleyjumper chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful.
Fire The Canon chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
This is my first of 3 reviews for placing first in this event. Sorry it has taken so long.

This was such an inventive and imaginative piece. I absolutely loved it. I really liked how you portrayed Astoria/a pureblood family. It was like what we know, yet also different. No spelling or grammar mistakes that I could see, so well done and congrats for coming first!
kci47 chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
This was a really sweet look at Draco and Astoria's relationship. I don't know why, but in canon I always assumed that they had this cold, reserved marriage, so I was happy to read something that shows them being a little more human.
silver-nightstorm chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
A very sweet concept, although I found it strange that Draco would buy her a Muggle keyboard. Besides that, nicely done!
dragonflybeach chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Beautiful piece. That's what I love about the barely mention characters, is that you can just take them and run with them. You've done a masterful job of breathing life and humanity in Astoria.
fabricated fantasies chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Another really prettily written piece - your writing is just so gorgeous. I loved your depiction of Astoria and Draco here, though they are so incredibly different to my own, since they're actually happy here, and yeah. Well, Astoria isn't happy in the first half, but she's reunited with her "lost love" by the end, so yay! I loved the truth in this - some people really can push their children too far, and it was lovely to see that truth represented in fiction. Great job!
The Original Horcrux chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Awwww I love Draco/Astoria they are by far the cutest Slytherin pairing. I love the way that different authors characterise Astoria and I definitely like yours a lot. I love how this revolved around the piano/keyboard and Astoria's parents forcing her to do it. I think its a very realistic situation as some parents can force things upon their children, like things they wished that they could do when they were younger but didn't get the chance, and the kids hate it and they eventually refuse to do it or rebell against it, which is exactly what Astoria did. Great job, I really enjoyed this!
owluvr chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
I've actually, started to like reading about Draco/Astoria. But I liked this story! I liked the part where you compared her to a puppet, I thought that that was a very good metaphor because that's really what she was for a while. I also liked how you had her parents sitting behind her, killing the music and making it impossible for her to play. That was very good and realistic. You still have perfect last lines, as always. Great job!
Gamma Orionis chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
I loved Astoria in this. I don't ship her with Draco at all, but I did feel sorry for her, and I loved her feelings about the piano... it's sad that sometimes people make us hate things that we really love...
However, I'm 99 percent sure that Draco would never get his wife a keyboard - those are a muggle thing, and the Malfoys probably wouldn't even know about them, and if they did, they would surely look down on them. And I don't see any reason why the Malfoy's wouldn't have room for a piano - they live in a manor, after all, and they're sort of rich...
I'm sorry to be picky about that, but it took me right out of the story :(
Kazlene la Suicine chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
This is one of my favorite Drastoria fics. I love the anguish and the honesty. I love how much it shows about pureblood parenting, and Draco's and Astoria's relationship. Good job
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