|Reviews for Creating the Strongest Guild|
| Ryuus2 chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Well, this is interesting. "What if Laaxus wasn't just dicking around?" Very nicely done. I'd have liked to see his shocked reaction when Lucy took down Bixlow though.
Keep up the great work!
| AshK1980 chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
This was a pretty decent story. Although I would've liked to see Laxus' Reaction to Lucy beating Bickslow. I bet you he would be really steamed. Good work though!
| Lady Ange Shadow chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Nice, really really nice even if I would enjoyed to know what Laxus was thinking about Lucy beating Bixslow.
| Mikey H chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
As Promised Raz _
Laxus was very much in-character and your writing was good as always. One thing is that you made such a small chapter which somehow lacked surroundings, causing my image of the whole scenery to be a black hole with just dialogue and thoughts ..
Other than that I enjoyed it
| moonlightnight1 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
weird story but good
| Son Goshen chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Laxus was pretty in character. Nice one-shot. :D
| aprildragonfire16 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
You should add another chapter where Mira beat Freed, Lucy beat Bixlow and the other stuff and you should also add hie reaction to when he lost! I hope you do it, that wud be awesome! :D
| Neko-Tiara chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Are you going to write a second part? When the girls are restored and join the fight?