Reviews for Close
Civilized Monster chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Beautiful, simply beautiful. The control you wrote the characters with and the attention to their dialogue was very nice. The last line tied it all down; great job.
I think this actually has a lot of potential to grow into a bigger story.
lily moonlight chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Loved it :D It was beautifully written and made me smile, even though it was sad, too. Poor Stella; I felt so sorry for her, feeling alone. I had a really vivid picture of her in her apartment and missing everything and everyone in NY. I loved all the details you included in there, such as the stain on Mac's couch from him spilling his coffee and Adam dancing, and Flack's eyes, of course :D Really well done. Fantastic dialogue also between them and the last line was just perfect :D
Moska chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Oh, CA, thank you for a wonderful little read :) Yes, that's what partners do...and I miss Mac's real partner dearly.
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Amazing story! I really enjoyed it! I'm glad that Mac came to see Stella! I loved Mac’s last line! Very sweet!
SMackedCaskett chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Love it :)