|Reviews for Passageways|
| The Burning Heart chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
Brilliant, keep up the good work.
| Rio47 chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
Hey mate another great chapter. I'm really looking forward to the mayhem of the Black family meeting and also the rest of the conversation with Dorea.
| Paladin-kriss chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
| Bruto22 chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
i love where you stopped the chapter on heheh cant think of a better line.
| Senyor Fier Mensheir chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
| Nzl Onyx chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
Wow another great chapter, nice job with the cliffhanger, but please don't make us wait ages for next chapter...
I do have a question though, why would Harry go back to his time? What does he have there? There is no point. Luna is his only friend, along with sort of Hermione (Why does everyone make it so she is enchanted or under potions? Why can't she just be a ******?).
From a personal level there is no point in Harry ever going back to his timeline, unless you are planning on bringing Hermione back with him, dear god I hope not, that would completely kill it. Logic-wise it doesn't really make much sense either, he is going to leave the time all together eventually, and change it big time with doing so, so anything he does in his old timeline is pointless.
This is just my point of view, you of course might have some twist here that I can't see to do with Harry's Timeline but.. I don't know
Other than that one thing, I think this is an absolute great story. Probably one of the best I have read on this site, keep it up!
| Othinus chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
Before I start... YES A NEW CHAPTER!
Bloody Hell indeed! Hnnn... Moody would be a good asset... but... hnnn...
Ummm... what was with that kiss? And why didn't he try to push her away? I know it was kind of innocent, but... Luna was right that it's not right to kiss a married man. I AM a Lunarry fan, but I felt a bit disgusted at that part. I just so hope that you make Passageways PURE Bella/Harry (well the original Harry).
Besides, I thought Harry already decided to live in the past with Bella, so why the attachment and surprise that he changed his time? If I were in his place that would have been obvious..?
| Riskreader chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
Hummm... I note that the future diposition of House Eveningshade is up in the air are they quietly hiding until a certain event or did the spies manage to wipe them out?
| dennisud chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
Well changes are happening in fact more then the duo are ready for. I also liked the scenes with Luna and Hermione. Wonder if tey will invoke House protection on those two.
Great idea to involve Dorea and given the previous chapters conversations I'd say the Blacks and the Potters will be intertwined fr the coming troubles!
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
I am really loving this story so far but I'm confused as to why you had Harry go back to the future. Wouldn't it be much more effective to fight voldemort in bella's time and maybe just go back to gather information (like buying history books to know when attacks are). Also Harry would have less of a target on himself in the past because h isn't the BWL.
| karthik9 chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
| deathgeonous chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
Nice update. Very interesting as well. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
| Elunas chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
You, my friend, have kept me riveted since i started reading when i first stumbled upon your story. I have personal, rather rude choice words for your cliffhanger, but from one writer to another i commend you keeping me waiting anxiously for your next chapter. Kudos to you, i cannot wait for the next chapter.
| Darkelighter chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
I cannot wait for the next chapter. You have really got my attention with this story. I find myself looking practically everyday for the next chapter. thank you for a entertaining story that holds my attention.
| Unknown Sterata chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
Nice way to end in none the less and I could have definitely kept reading. Thanks for the awesome update.