|Reviews for Passageways|
| RebeccaRoy chapter 33 . 3/11
Wow, things are heating up here nicely!
| randver chapter 33 . 3/11
First of all Thanks for updating, I've been missing this story and was hoping it wasn't going to be forgotten.
Now onto the review. As far as this particular chapter went the most interesting things were A. the children plotting a murder, in normal cannon I really couldn't see dear sweet little Lilly Evans ever plotting someone's death for any reason but this Lilly who has just lost her father as well as her sister yes I can see her planning on killing anyone and everyone that had to do with her pain.
B. The investigation that Moody's doing was nice, it's fun to see the plans and plots in action.
I can understand the needed rehash of the "must remain neutral law" between Bella and Lilith we the readers already knew the information from Harry's interaction with the Morrigan but now Bella's up to speed so hopefully with both of them in the same harness pulling as a team there won't be any more issues with the Eveningshade family loosing their powers anymore.
I personally wouldn't mind seeing a bit more interaction between Bella and the Angel/Demon/Whatever that founded the line but if it's not needed for the plot I'm not going to be too disappointed.
Poor Voldie has got to be feeling a little bit of pressure right about now, his minions are being slaughtered in a very public manner and if he has any hope of being taken seriously as a true threat he's going to have to step up or go home.
Again Thanks for the update and I'm looking forward to the next one.
| ultima-owner chapter 33 . 3/10
The brotherhood killed some of the more useful people voldie has
| WhiteElfElder chapter 33 . 3/10
Oh boy, things are about to get very bloody. I hope Harry can achieve what Lilith says he needs so that he can become what the clan needs.
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/10
You need a little more description, but I really like your FFN
| FateBurn chapter 33 . 3/10
Excellent chapter like always please continue soon cant wait for more.
| Theta-McBride chapter 33 . 3/10
Oooh. I'm so looking forward to St. Patrick's Day. :-D
My family always has a huge celebration!
| area808code chapter 33 . 3/10
That's great that two evil factions are killing each other off. Less for Harry and company to rid the wizarding world of these varmints. Great chapter!
P.S. Although I like getting updates quicker, I much rather you take care of yourself and tend to your personal issues first. Welcome back and I love this story. One of my favorites!
| joejoe11478 chapter 33 . 3/10
Great chappie. the story is still suspensefull and keeps me on edge. please don't wait so long to update.
| Tara6 chapter 33 . 3/10
This is a very very interesting fic. It's 2 AM at the moment and the past few hours were spent reading (with a few breaks I admit) and seeing as I have to get up again in 4 hours I'll just tell you that you're an awesome author with great imaginatin and I can't wait to see wha you have in store next.
| Noble Korhedron chapter 25 . 3/10
ULP! I REALLY hope he doesn't make any connections to the Eveningshades... *worried*
| Albionia chapter 33 . 3/10
| Noble Korhedron chapter 19 . 3/10
Heh-heh! Oh, Walburga nearly screwed up, BIG-TIME! *EVIL GRIN* I LOVE how nonchalant Harry is being about all this. :-D
| Noble Korhedron chapter 17 . 3/10
UGH! THAT'S IT - I WANT SNAPE AND DUMBLEDORE DEAD! YA HEAR ME?! DEAD!
| Noble Korhedron chapter 16 . 3/10
Just from the first paragraphs, I want to murder that doddering old fool. And I totally cracked up laughing at Dorea's reaction to Harry's confession.