Reviews for Passageways
pawn6252 chapter 17 . 3/5/2013
I like the story so far it moves along very well .
becuzitswrong chapter 17 . 3/5/2013
Great chapter. I am surprised that Dumbledore didn't go after Hermione earlier, over and beyond teh love potion she was given. Hermione was always his greatest obstacle to an ignorant and complacent Harry Potter.

Great fight scene.
Belle Morte Rising chapter 17 . 3/5/2013
Great chapter, great way to end things in Harry's time, love the way you killed snape.
Spyrl chapter 17 . 3/5/2013
Awesome story, I'm finding myself hitting refresh on it every few hours just to see if a new chapter is out, even though it's only been two days since the last one... this story may be as addictive as a class A drug, damn you... now I need rehab, again...
jabarber69 chapter 16 . 3/5/2013
Bloody Hell is right! WoW!

oh and I forgot but back a chapter two or so the part with luna and the kisses tasting like butterscotch, luna is a hoot and she would be funny as all get out ot have as a friend...in the movies she is kinda cute too!
jabarber69 chapter 15 . 3/5/2013
wow I dont know if I like the ideal that harry had limits or should I say those kinds of limits on his new magic, to tire out doing the little bit of magic he did...bothersome what would happen if he was fighting dumby or voldie and suddenly had to say hold on I got to go sit down for 24 to 48 hrs to rechard...
jabarber69 chapter 14 . 3/5/2013
WoW! great chapter and fight scene hell the whole bloody thing was GREAT! sorta reminded me of a harry potter gets the powers of danny phatom sorta I believe I have seen 2 maybe 3 of those types of stories before on this site and was really interested in that plot line...so again great story, I should be going to bed need to be at worked in about 10 hrs and need to get to sleep but to hell with it I cant stop reading this even if I wanted to and I sure as hell don't!
jabarber69 chapter 12 . 3/5/2013
good chapter but I figured the part where malfoy sr recognized the ring would of been more substantial, but still damn good story...
Rose1414 chapter 17 . 3/5/2013
please update!
jabarber69 chapter 11 . 3/5/2013
hehehehehehe cant believe he forgot the next part...
Toujours Pur chapter 17 . 3/5/2013
Brilliant chapter, I am happy that Harry is starting to get more allies and that he will be staying in Bella time.

Just a note for you, will Sirius be returning to the black family home to for the meeting?

Keep up the brilliant work hopefully we get an update on Sunday again!
jabarber69 chapter 13 . 3/5/2013
you know I sorta of lost interest near end of chapter 11 when lady hogwarts was tellling harry that to continue he would loose himself thingy, well since this is such a GREAT story and then looking at your profile and remember reading one of your other stories before I decided to download this and your others to read again and again...etc... when something caught my eye at the end of this chapter where moody asked for eveningshade so I read this chapter and WHOA got my interest back now got to go back and reread ending of chapter 11 and also chapter 12, definitely want to find out what ole brax is so freaking afraid of...
rdg2000 chapter 14 . 3/5/2013
Loved it! I think next time o' Volde better show up if he expects to see Harry in action.

rdgale
rdg2000 chapter 13 . 3/4/2013
Nice chapter.

I was thinking that when Harry and Bella meet her, Harry can give him a little history lesson as to just who 'Lord Voldemort' really is. Bring up his own blood status and his time at Hogwarts. Then there's always the flaming letters.

See you next chapter.

rdgale
Guest chapter 9 . 3/4/2013
she dont need to go to that meeting she will probably be raped or something at it or something else bad will happen to her...anyway if I wasp a pervert, well hell I'm a guy so I guess I am...I would think that he needs to free her of the contract then pull her into his timeline and maybe bringing her sisters along too and then have bella, hermione and of course luna join his harem...hey I freely admit I'm a pervert...so what...

anyway I think they need to go into his timeline but hey its your story and I'm finding what happens to be highly entertaining...although being a guy I remember when I was a teenager all I thought about was sex with a girl, and I would do anything to have sex with a girl...
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