Reviews for Passageways
potter71 chapter 37 . 4/8
I am really enjoying the story and hope that you health is getting better. I hope you are able to update soon.
gutenn chapter 37 . 4/4
Great story so far want a lot more thanks...
ninjaaa0006 chapter 3 . 4/5
Dumbeldore is horrible in this and deserves his entire world destroyed for this
Guest chapter 37 . 3/29
Really nice story with complex plot! the behaviour on protecting families is quite realistic. Stay well and keep healthy author!
Okami no Shinigami chapter 37 . 3/30
please continue this fic soon it is one of the few Harry/Bella fics I have found that is more than smut or PWP I am thoroughly enjoying it
percyrider78 chapter 36 . 3/29
Please keep writing. I hope you get better. Your story is a beacon of light is all
ghbb chapter 15 . 3/27
i dont like that she is learning about his family before he is...
one problem chapter 12 . 3/27
why the fuck did bella and harry just stand there as the man ran out side then watch as it was set on fire and the man killed? Harry's saving people thing would have never let him just stand there like that and there was plenty of time for him to act.
Cinthya chapter 22 . 3/26
It was cool, until the pagan, lilith and the rest of the world, dont mistake me i love the prince in the dark kingdom, and like your story, it is just that... Um i think the introduction is different there they were introducing me to harry potter in a chaged world here harry is making the changes for his future in wich luna see 5 posible futures that day, wich is ilogic if you make only one future exist and surpress the rest, then he shall not be coming out of there, never because bella knowing him is still making changes just by that fact and all that sumarians and demons i dont know why it doesnt appeals me in this story, i mean i had read travel secrets, and there are ritual and stuff... Maybe your aproach, to quickly and bang demons and bang godness sex... It was like, what, and even if he doesnt control it and the emotions and the risk, i dont feel it .. like magical exaustion 1 weeck sleep, oh well...
Or maybe i suffer apathy, and seeing he winning do not appeal me...
RAY chapter 34 . 3/24
I love this story!

I have just finished chapter 34.

I look forward to reading many new chapters soon!

Best Regards,R
Mizukodai chapter 5 . 3/20
He's a pansy and it's boring, not a good combination.
Mizukodai chapter 1 . 3/20
STOP MAKING HIM A WHINY PANSY!
Guest chapter 37 . 3/14
I'm intrigued by this story please update!
FicTIuNFaN chapter 37 . 3/14
Love it. I would like to see more of this story.
The Last Centurion 1 chapter 1 . 3/11
I usually declare all the good stories that I come through as the best story I read on this site but if anyone of them deserves that title it is this one and to keep it different and more than all the other 'best stories' I followed and favourited your profile! you're a genius to think this! thank you!
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