It sound like Severus is fishing for information. Intending to turn against the old man?

How vile and wicked your Dumbledore is. I wish I could describe hime like that in my stories, the perfect villain. I can't wait until the real dark lord is neutered. Along with Severus Snape and Ronald Weasley, it'll be perfect. Its a shame that Hermione can't be saved though, she would make the perfect third person for a tri-bond with Harry and Bellatrix.
Looking forward to the next update, keep 'em coming.

I think that the spells Dumbledors placed on Harry should be noticed and removed soon and make it impossible for them to be reapplied because it would be funny to have one of Dumbledors plans so easily.

oh! Wow, Dumbledore is out of control. I just hope that the other professors can help Harry and that Hermione eventually finds out the truth. Though, Harry should tell her off and break heart.

I really can't say awesome chapter here it actually kinda made me sick to the stomach how far Dumbles will go. Please at least have Hermione on his side. Find some way to save her.

Another good chapter. Cheers! :D

Well, the story is promising, but the third chapter feels like a filler. There was no need for the chapter. Sure you explained everything, but you destroyed possible intrigue and tension. And the worst thing, it didn't make the plot more believable.
Too many pows is bad for the story...
I'll read another chapter, but if thing won't get better I'll drop the story.

How are you going to have Harry find out about all of what Albus and his so called minions and manipulations and deceit and some how fix that quickly as I can see Harry finding this all out in the future and setting it right and maybe put the MOB in his place in a cruelly and cunningly way.

Interesting hope harry fixes everything for himself

it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates

You got a very very interesting premise going here. As it's only the second chapter I'm not going to nitpick the plot so far of course I read some of the reviews for this story so I'm not going to double back on what's already been said . Besides that I was very interested in reading the first two chapters and I do hope to read more. I realize the keyword here is fanfiction therefore you wrighting for enjoyment so I do hope that you keep up the work. :)

Will harry be in his parents' timeline?
or would bella be the one going into the future? It would be interesting either way.

I guess the Black title could be used as a solution for Ms. Black's 'rudy' predicament.

Can't wait to see what will be next...

Sounds like Bella is going to either be bear or raped if she is not careful. How will the school help her to avoid that scenario?

If Harry has three elves, why not have them go and get his map and his cloak back, and ruin everything that he theif that took it has while doing so? What about Hedwig, is she alive or did someone in the school or the Dursleys kill her?

I realize that this is a beat-on-Harry story, but you can at least give him back the artifacts that link him to the past of his father and god-father.

This is pretty fantastic... I hope Harry get's sorted into Slytherin, I don't think he would be able to take any more of the gryffs, and he could protect Bella there.

If you pair Lily up with Snape, it would be great. I don't believe in the "if he was never born he wouldn't have gone back-argument" anyways, Harry would still exist, but the future would be different or a parallel universe, you can kill your parents in the past, and you would still be there. No consequence there.

How good is Harry at the dark arts? I know he learned all the Black family magic, but will he build on that?

Hood story anyways, looking forward to the next update.