Reviews for Passageways |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to read more. Ron and especially Hermione are going to be so sorry when the truth comes out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting start. Will this be sort of like the lake house where out side the room they are in their own times? Bennett. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story but 2 weeks ackk... thats wayyyyy to long for a update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Jerry, I was really pleased to see you've started another story. This chapter, at least, doesn't compare to your previous fic, unfortunately. Ron and Hermione are portrayed as the worst of cliches, and Dumbledore's behavior is unexplained and not understandable. Why would he allow that level of antagonism against Harry? Dozens of attacks, apparently with no repercussions, the abandonment of his entire House, then asking - demanding, actually - that he return to the Dursleys' in ten months, when all Dumbledore had to do was get the memory of Voldemort's resurrection and show it to the school. McGonagall and the other professors also should come into criticsm, since they obviously didn't supply any help to Harry or get Albus off his ancient arse to protect his student while at his school. All of these characters are completely OOC, Ron especially. Who in their right mind would listen to that idiot when half the school thinks he's a jealous prat, lazy, and has disgusting eating habits, and the other half think he's a blood traitor, lazy and has disgusting eating habits? Sorry, but this is a very poor start, especially coming after your previous story. I'm wondering whether I should spend any more time on this fic. Sorry. - N Flamel |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow next chapter please A |
![]() ![]() ![]() For starters I loved the cliffie lol. Great start to this story I am looking forward to see where and when they turn up again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Two good, but somewhat similar chapters. The plot is ok so far, maybe a little surprising -keep it up. The question is what year they're in? I'd rather like for Harry to go back in time than Bellatrix. It's the matter of when will they come out when they will exit Room Of Requirement. It'd be a bad idea if both will exit in their own times, but perhaps they'd be able to do so at will? Harry lacks resources at the moment. One of the ways to remedy that would be to succeed the past Lord of the Black Family. That way he could annul any marridge contracts, get money from Black Vault, etc. The other option which come to mind is to use the Room to create a portal to Gringotts or comunicate with gobblins by a portrait (of f.e. Rowena Rawenclaw). Or better yet, have the RoR provide a vault filled with money or at least a passage like annother door to the user's vault. The thing is they'll start to help each other at some point so they need access to the same timeline and Bella could be recognized in the future. That leaves the past. Hmm if Harry somehow menaged to send Walburga her portrait so she could talk with her painting then perhaps they would want to create a contract between Harry and Bella -could be fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story. Look forward to seeing where it goes. Cheers! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start to this story... With Harry meeting Bella in 1971 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fanfiction please don't stop keep on the good work and update soon ! Tchouss Xylion |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOve the new story, the idea is unique and as always i adore the writing style, can't wait to see how long it takes for them to figure out their from different times. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting story... I wonder what will happen next? It's really good so far! Love the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good Story. Update soon please. I'm definatly putting this in my favorites. |