Reviews for Passageways |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Unique wayto have them meet. I do hope the sisters and Hermione can be allies in their different time zones! I'm sure their interaction will change things too! dennisud |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its a good start. Post next soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. Only thing I would have liked to see more of is the voice in the first chapter. I would have liked it to be drawn out more. Otherwise, great start. update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun beginning. I haven't read anything like this before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems to be a decent story idea so far, but I will reserve judgement for a few more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fascinating start. Looking forward to seeing how you make this one work:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story I'm hooked and looking forward to the next update. ) I hope Harry gets his dad's cloak and map back from Weasel, who else would steal it but him. So Ginny and Arthur still owe Harry a life debt in your story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() All right, I have read these two chapters first, and certain parts I like a lot, others, not so much. I enjoyed the Bellatrix stuff, she's a fascinating character, and it's interesting to think of how she might have been before joining the DE's, and this Bella looks to be a hoot and a half. I also enjoyed how she and Harry met, and would be interesting to see how they might get together, and if that could have an impact on the time Harry lives in, or if young Bella is stuck there. Now, I understand OOC characters, but this Ron, Hermione, and the rest including the Headmaster are just a bit too much, with the jealous factor ramped up to 20 at times. It'd flow a bit more for me if Ron was unsure, and not know what to think, and with a Hermione who wants to be with him, but is still more of the rock she was for Harry in canon, I mean, if she was willing to stay during the hunt in book 7, I can't see her just walking away, no matter how much she wants Ron. Looking forward to the next part and how things will go for the new pair in the Room. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, this is most certainly interesting. Can they switch back in their times to mess with people? How quickly will either realize the other is from the past/future respectively? Very interesting so far. Kingdark |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems pretty awesome. I like your portrayel of the Black sisters, especially Cissy. It's cute that you had her and Lily be friends. You did a good job building up both times, so it should be a fun ride to see what chaos ensues from both Bella and Harry. ;) Can't wait for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting spin Time travel that does not involve Harry as the Traveler. Does Bellatrix stay in Harry's time or is the room out of time and they each go back to their own time? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic start so far, keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay |