Reviews for Passageways
jimmy.oz chapter 18 . 12/28/2022
Well the only issues i can see is that he still need to take his owl and newts but that might be an easy thing. the other thing would be that him being young everyone is going to try and act like Orion did. Glad luna was able to be happy and wonder if that means that they did get rid of Voldemort and Dumbledore. think it would have been interesting to see an older version of harry meet luna and see if she still remembers him.
jimmy.oz chapter 17 . 12/28/2022
Does kind of suck he didn't learn about the horcruxes before leaving and all. would think that lady Hogwarts would tell them about it since she does have one in the room. not sure why she would be mad about them killing the boys when they were about to rape someone. in my mind they got what they deserved.
jimmy.oz chapter 13 . 12/28/2022
Now harry needs to learn all he can to fight back for real and find a way so that he can actually be a part of the group that leads the magical world so he can help keep Dumbledore in check. wonder if his family will find out the truth at some point though. hope they do so he can have a family at least even if they don't have the same relationship they would originally. plus the new harry will have had a good life most likely.
jimmy.oz chapter 12 . 12/28/2022
They should have killed him now the Malfoys and even Voldemort will know about him or at least the family he comes from.
jimmy.oz chapter 11 . 12/28/2022
It does kind of suck that everything he is doing no one will know about it other than maybe Luna but at the same time i can understand him wanting to do it since it will save a lot of lives. just wish there were more updates so that the story could be completed.
jimmy.oz chapter 10 . 12/28/2022
Well guess we will see what changes happen in the timeline or if it will happen at all. no matter what though he should have the elfs get the paperwork he wrote on.
jimmy.oz chapter 8 . 12/28/2022
Wonder why harry keeps forgetting that Dumbledore is also an enemy along with Voldemort. I do agree though that him going to the past and changing it is for the best but then i am not sure what will happen to him though. since in order for him to go to the past wouldn't he still have to do everything he did before but if he goes and changes it all it wouldn't have happen. that is why time travel is confusing. then again could just have him some how do something to be outside of time.
jimmy.oz chapter 7 . 12/27/2022
Damn that really is a horrible place to leave the story at.
jimmy.oz chapter 6 . 12/27/2022
Just thought about it but the best bet probably would be for Harry to go to her time in order to save and make the place better. if they do things in his time then basically everyone will still be dead.
jimmy.oz chapter 3 . 12/27/2022
Too be honest that is how i always feel Dumbledore and Snape really are even from the original. the actor was the only thing that saved Snape from complete hate. i do hope that they get what is coming to them even if the other three changed there ways they still need some punishment.
jimmy.oz chapter 1 . 12/27/2022
Well story seems interesting so hope to see some updates. also wonder if he got the elfs to get the map and his cloak back. would have been the first thing i did asked them to do.
Kraniumbrud chapter 37 . 12/26/2022
still hoping for more!
Volunteer Insomniac chapter 2 . 12/26/2022
why does Bellatrix speak like that? she is a daughter of a noble house, raised to be superior to all others, she would act more refined and restrained even among those she is closest to. and with her upbringing there is absolutely no way her and her siblings aren't pureblood supremacists on some scale.
in my understanding Andromeda only married Ted because 1) she wasn't as sold on the pureblood thing as the rest of her family, or 2) because Ted slowly broke down what little pureblood beliefs she had.
Narcissa definitely wouldn't be so offended by Bellatrix referred to lily as a halfblood since she is just a typical pureblood, though not as zealous as others.
I didn't know if you were trying do do something different than cannon, but this is a little too off Cannon, as all purebloods, of any belief, would just be desensitized to the caste system of wizard society, therefore I doubt that neither narcissa nor Andromeda would take offense at the insinuations against lily, and lily wouldn't be offended because she doesn't know about the caste system or the negative connotations of being a halfblood or muggleborn.
and why is everyone smart enough to come to a conclusion that Harry wouldn't be alive if voldemort really were resurrected, but not smart enough to wonder why he would lie, in my opinion it is much easier to question his Motivations to lie rather than how he survived if he is telling the truth, after all, they hail him as a hero, the 'boy who lived, the one who defeated voldemort and survived the unsurvivable, it wouldn't be hard to believe one more unlikely thing would happen to one who defies expectation. it's my opinion that you have made the hogwarts students too smart when relating to this specific argument, as, if they were actually that smart they would see how flimsy the thought that Harry would lie is, and how unlikely it is that Harry himself was the sole reason he survived the killing curse as a baby is.

on another topic, I think that Harry should be more angry considering what has happened to him, though I am more fond of angry and cynical characters. If I were to write Harry, he wouldn't really have any good feelings left over after his disillusionment of the way things are (his friends betraying him, his 'foster'-family betraying him, Dumbledore using him, etc...), I would characterize him as using his anger towards the world as a coping mechanism to avoid falling into full-on depression, and only being remedied by his shunting into the past, and finding new reasons to be happy/ loses reason to be angry.
hope this was helpful and that you will continue to write stories.
lil-Bear2020 chapter 37 . 12/21/2022
I hope that you are doing well and am waiting for the next update
Guest chapter 6 . 12/16/2022
this fictiontoo many fools try playing god jah/jesus punishs them and us in his own time stupid corupted sinful evil mankind
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