Reviews for Sunset Horizon
Guest chapter 12 . 8/16/2014
Awsome, couldn't have linked the romace better my self. Loved the chapter very sweet and nice.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/10/2014
I like the idea of Sayer being a bad guy who romances with Akiza, I know you have plans, but I would have selected the same role for Sayer if I was writing this. I hate Sayer as a person, personaly I want to cut his eyes out, but character wise I think he's a great character your supost to hate.
BitterSweetTimes chapter 47 . 4/11/2014
I loved your story. Reading stories about Yugioh 5ds in Western-Style is the ones I enjoy the most.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/26/2014
i cant find the unedited version of the ch. in the link you posted
bbtdgfan882 chapter 10 . 2/16/2014
ARE YOU SHITTING ME?! ABOUT THE MARK THING?! Son of a bitch! Good call, though. Nice catch. )
Yurei Hanatsuki chapter 7 . 10/14/2013
Why we think pizzas are flat? Whaaaat? :/
That Dastard Cerberus chapter 48 . 8/15/2013
I will review as much as I can. Ugh, it's been too long!
TrueDragon117 chapter 48 . 8/7/2013
I love this story! Can't wait for next chapter. I love the Kalin and Misty couple (Revengeshipping) 3 LOVE IT! I hope Yusei knows how to deal with children. He should get tips from Kalin cause Nico and West are like his kids :)
Sanokal chapter 47 . 7/31/2013
Normally, I'm not a fan of AU.
This is an exception.
It's well written, the character interactions are brilliantly fleshed out, and above all, it was fun to read. I actually almost enjoyed the start of Yusei and Akizas relationship more than the end. The intergration of the Earthbounds was well done as well, if not fully finished. It did seem to end rather quickly, owing to the above though.
Seto Takahashi reborn chapter 48 . 7/1/2013
So yea, we have conversed earlier about me reading your adult version of this story a few days ago. Well at this current time writing this I have finished reading the entire story and am anticipating for the next four epilogues. I shall start with the bad and work to the good (if you can call it bad). The few things I have to say is that I think it would have been nice to move the second lemon closer to the twenties if not thirties chapter or added another one in the thirties or forties chapter. I think it would have made the story a little more consistent. This also deals with consistency. I felt the beginning of the story was pretty dark and was impressed by it, the story never got dark again and their was an intense amount of fluff. Also I think the Zone funeral part should have been it's own ark. Nevertheless, I am damned impressed by what you did. I will admit, this is probably one of the best fanfictions I have read in this fandom. I absolutely mean that. You have a natural knack for making smart and witty comments whether dialogue or other literary tools. The story you had was well written and very enjoyable and even though some characters were kind of occ it worked. Your writing skill is also admirable as when I was reading you allowed me to see your universe as opposed to telling me it like some other authors I've seen on fanfiction. I think I am confident enough in saying that you even match the level of writers I've seen on the Inuyasha fandom. The reason I mention this is because their are some of the greatest writers I've seen on the internet in it. I will be looking forward to seeing more of your work. Also when I said starting with the bad, I don't mean it as flames but hopefully it displays as constructive criticism, I know I write better with it. Thanks for the story I truly enjoyed it
Rapis-Razuri chapter 48 . 6/30/2013
(Late review is late)
Oh yay! Character development for Jack!
He grows out of his "Rebellious Prince" phase and decides to return to Granel (even if he must really hate the lifestyle) to take control of things even though there's nothing stopping him from just letting those nobles kill each other over the throne. least he has Carly and one would imagine that he would try to fix relations between his country and Yusei's considering how all his friends are still there
ChibiX chapter 48 . 6/29/2013
Reminds me of when Jack constantly talked about being King of duelists in 5D’s.
guardian of the aura Aurasoul chapter 48 . 6/27/2013
Ahh its so sweet of how Jack really cares for Carly its so cute and loving!
PDS chapter 48 . 6/26/2013
great job with this chapter. I love jacks response. i imagined he would have paled an nearly peed himself, but thats not jacks style.
Flame-Metal-Heart chapter 48 . 6/25/2013
Nice job, nice job. I can't wait for the next epilogue chps. I hope everyone else gets to see their dragons like Jack and Yusei had. Can't wait for more:D
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