Reviews for Dark Secrets |
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![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! Love it! Very different from what I've read before, but I like the idea and plot you have formed here! Please oh please keep going! Really can't wait for an up date! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did I miss something? Where was the investigation that Nigel did? The confrontation with Emily? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yayyyy and update! Awesome! Thanks for sharing! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AAAHHH! *JUMPS UP AND DOWN PUNCHING THE AIR* I LOVED this chapter! I'm so happy Miranda forgave Andy...and i love makeup sex ;) wonderfully well-written..again! Can't wait for the next chapter, Adrianna |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Burning!? Where is the Burning of Emily I already have my pitchfork!? _ To tell the truth this is one of the first half of the story is one of the hardest read for me. If din't love you or this story I would have stop. But I love love you and this story so I brace forward. I hope to see of your work. I still hope to see Emily burn by Serena. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I get were both sides are coming from, and that chapter was very passionate I love it. |
![]() ![]() loved it, glad they resolve their issues |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent looking forward to the next one brilliant thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) That's all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon I am in love with this sorry! Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH NO! ANDY IS AN IDIOT! : She didn't even LISTEN to Miranda's side! Didn't Miranda tell Barbara 'no' to their bet? Ugh. Ok. sorry, i just had to vent my frustration! :) Can't wait to see what's in story for Emily *rubs hands together* Also, Serena since it's kind of her fault too... I love your writing-Please continue soon! Adrianna |
![]() ![]() Hey girl, keep writing your stories and don't worry, they're great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I usually don't post reviews to my own work, answering the comments in private messages. Unfortunately, I'll make an exception to answer the last one. I post my stories for fun and nothing more, so I'm not just looking for compliments. Don't get me wrong, compliments are great, but not the first reason to write. I write, because I have to, because it's imperative to me and is just a way to share my work. I appreciate the offer of a beta reader and perhaps you didn't pay attention, but I already have one, a fantastic one indeed! I really love her work and her respectful way to help me, giving me space to choose my own words. You could write in own story, following this plot - that wouldn't be a problem. If you might, I would be delighted to read it, believe me! Usually, when I don't like an author choice for words, that means I don't like the author - is simple like that, maybe it's the the same in your situation. I have no problems with constructive criticism and to be honest I'm not easily offended, but I think that the work of my beta, who is not paid to do this job, should be more appreciated... Sorry about the harsh words, but I felt I needed to write it... Karin |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I really like where the plotline for this story is going. But your word choices are really screwing me up. Might I suggest a beta reader? |