|Reviews for Immortal|
| possessedbutterfly chapter 9 . 9/29/2013
You need to update! Awesome!
| vertical-to-the-horizon chapter 9 . 2/17/2013
oh my feels 3 one of the best stories of Newt i've read yet! you really captured the feelings and dialogues perfectly! :)
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
Asdfghjkl! I love this :D there are no words...
| Anonymous chapter 9 . 1/10/2013
I like the different points of view here! When I read I tend to get stuck on one character, and this didn't let me do that, so I think I got more of the story. Also this scene/event was one of the ones I was most able to connect with in my head while reading the book, and it seems like we had a pretty similar vision :)
| Randomcat100 chapter 2 . 12/28/2012
I love this! I love Newt.
| shyyumi chapter 9 . 10/30/2012
I completely understand the computer thing..I just got done my story for the Maze Runner books and I started it last year but never completed my first chapter until sunday cause of my computer! Computers are useful, but suck half the time lol. Anyways, great story keep writing! I missed Alby in the books and threw the book when he died, but felt bad for Newt and Minho as well. Now I feel bad for Alby and completely understand what he's going through. Nice job capturing their characters btw.
| theseaisblue chapter 8 . 10/25/2012
Please update soon! Its sooo amazing
| theseaisblue chapter 7 . 10/23/2012
Awwwww Please dont end it. If you do i will die
| DJfire chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
thank you everyone! I really enjoyed all your comments. If you have any questions about my story please PM me! Or if you want to be a hater on my story PM me! Thanks again for reading!
| MustangRider2 chapter 4 . 9/3/2012
That was amazing :3 3
| Aidreanne-Now chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
OMG! I love how you switched the characters and their POV, it's really good.
| Aidreanne-Now chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I really like this beginning. I just feel like you went to far ahead instead of giving more details.
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/17/2012
Wow! I love this! Please update soon!
| Adorable Goth Chick chapter 3 . 8/5/2012
i thought it was quite interesting
i never thought about how affaul it has to be in the glade i just thought suiside was a lost cause
| Adorable Goth Chick chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
well so far love it!