Reviews for On the Edge
Mauraudeurs'era chapter 1 . 8/23/2016
You should be ashamed, you just made me cry!
The chorus worked perfectly as it brings singing to the dancing.
Lily Luna is 19 but she seems even younger, and it makes it all even more heart breaking.
I like the symbolism of her being buried next to Dobby,dancing was her own way to be free.
Rowling's Daughter chapter 1 . 6/3/2016
Oh, I LOVED it! I didn't cry-you'd have to do better than that, haha-but it was very touching, although I supose I'm just an ice queen. I adore it.
Dysfunctional-Nom-De-Plume chapter 1 . 12/18/2015
I love your freeverses. They really make me feel in awe. Especially this one, when I read it I cried. You actually inspired me to try and write one, too. I love your work! :D
PersianCalliope chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
You made me cry. AMAZING
Anna Starling chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
This was so... amazing. It actually made me cry, it was so touching.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
you're talented, dude
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Normally I hate free verses but this was quite good and I surprisingly enjoyed it. I really liked how you repeated that one stanza (is that what it's called?) and how you didn't try to do anything screwy with the words and letters, because that's just stupid. This was not only good, but it told a good story and flowed really nicely too. Good job!
nsheldonb chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
It's so true. This story is really nice. I shed a few tears when I first read this. Fred also died too and that was also sad along with Colin too.
AviaLee chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
i can't believe that your poetry is this good, even on the fourth reading of it.
SiriusHadesWinchester chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
but sad
SereneMayhem chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Wow. My eyes are filled with tears. This is beautiful :)
weasleyjumper chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
I cried and cried and cried. Broke my heart.
kaminoko-x chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Wow, this one's a tear-jerker. 'Beautifully sad'- I think that'd be the best description.
dayflow chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
this got me teary-eyed, so bittersweet and beautiful!
Break This Spell626 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Heartbreaking and beautiful, great job