Reviews for An Alliance
Obscured Angel chapter 1 . 4/12
The plot is great, but I'm sorry to say there is a very large amount of miss used of words.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 4 . 9/3/2014
See if you can get a better flow going, and can you make Merlin more sarcastic? He seems a bit tooo much like a pushover right now.
AsorenRM chapter 15 . 4/18/2014
I really enjoyed this but I thought it was a little weird hoe Arthur kept calling Merlin "baby" every time he addressed him.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/25/2014
Ok what the hell, why does this story have no punctuation and a lot of bad spelling. It's a good story, I just think u should've let someone proof read it before u posted anything.
Glynis chapter 10 . 11/7/2013
Oh just in time Merlin. Love!
Glynis chapter 9 . 11/7/2013
Aw poor Merlin, glad Arthur learnt his lesson :)
Glynis chapter 8 . 11/7/2013
Sex in a lake, that's a new one. love this :)
Glynis chapter 7 . 11/5/2013
Arthur falling off his chair lol. Loved to have seen that!
Glynis chapter 6 . 11/5/2013
lol Ygraine is funny, poor Merlin I wonder what she is doing with him lol
Glynis chapter 5 . 11/5/2013
Very true words there Merlin, fighting in anger won't get you far. great chapter
Glynis chapter 4 . 11/5/2013
I don't understand why Balinor has to shackle him but at least Arthur is going home and taking Merlin with him. Another great chap!
Glynis chapter 3 . 11/5/2013
I can understand Leon's anger but come on, Arthur only belongs with Merlin and Merlin with Arthur. I am loving this
Glynis chapter 2 . 11/5/2013
Who is it then who attacked Merlin?
Glynis chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Poor Arthur I know he hasn't done anything :)
Guest chapter 16 . 9/16/2013
the birth scene cracked me up I laugh so hard that I had tears running down my face thank u
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