|Reviews for Unwanted|
| ObsessedwReading chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Great job on this.
| yay chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
This is really nicely written.
| IAmAFrickingToad chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I love this! This is totally AMAZING!
| brankel1 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
| guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
"He wished I would leave La Push and never come back. He wished I would stop bugging him and Emily, stop shooting them bitter glances, stop making them feel guilty to be together. He'd never wanted something so much as to never see me again."
Prehaps that's the reason she really became a wolf to punish sam and remind him of his failings?
Keep up the good work
| The-Doll-on-the-Shelf chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Not too bad. I really like the emotion you conveyed in the story. Very few people take on Leah's perspective just because she has so few interactions with other characters, but you did a nice interpretation. The grammar was a little awkward in places, but nothing that more experience writing could not fix.