Even with the inconsistent details, this is one of the best HP fics I've ever read. Thank you for sharing your genius

I'm sure someone has mentioned this before, given that the story started eleven years ago, but the spell is Engorgio not Enlargo :) but you do you, this is a fanfic after all, and a great one I intend to finish reading in one sitting. If only I could get the day's work done first

Amazing read. Great writing, pacing, and plot! I’m sorry life has gotten so busy for you (and the rest of us) but wish you all the best on your future! Thank you for taking the time to publish the outline, I wish more authors would do it.

Huh? Whtv turn I thought this story was taking was definitely not this, still pretty good ngl

HUH

Wait this Draco is totally Tom, how could I know see it!

I don’t trust Fluer

Stephen Stebbins joined the meeting teice

Always love a Draco redemption arc, also I totally see you sneaking in that Tracy/Draco pairing

Called it, I was legit thinking it was probability pressure something, although I didn’t expect it to be that thorough

I missed when you posted this on portkey, and knowing this was going to be harmony. 3

This chapter made me pissed with Neville. I actually struggled to read that part of him being so stupidly stubborn.

Thank you. Thanks for all of it. Every hour I spend in my childhood reading this was magical. Congratulations for your wonderful family. All the best to you.

nice ending...really came out of left field

Such a shame that we don't get to enjoy the rest of the story, but thank you for the outline. It's rare to get some sort of closure over abandoned fics.

The story is outstanding example of fanfiction. The influence from Ender's Game is obvious, but the ruthless, win-at-all-costs take on combat being taught at Hogwarts made this fic very unique.

While there some mistakes with grammar, this is an enjoyable read. Highly recommended.