Reviews for Coming of the Storm
lettibelly chapter 17 . 5/4
I very like your fanfiction! i wait with impatience your suite!
ShadowSlayer0 chapter 1 . 4/19
3 elements would be Kekkei Touta not Kekkei Genkai
Shadowdragondanny chapter 17 . 3/4
marquis.shax chapter 17 . 3/1
I hope this story hasn't been discontinued as it's really good
marquis.shax chapter 1 . 3/1
hmm so combining elements of thor (the hammer) and kenichi (pink muscle) with Naruto this might be interesting
maxgoof296 chapter 4 . 1/19
There is a typo, third to last paragraph second to last line. You type "ii" instead of "I". But great chapter otherwise I love how this story is going.
Dulemina chapter 17 . 12/9/2014
Wahahahah hope you can update soon. This story is fantastic
firebluebird2006 chapter 17 . 10/6/2014
slight crossover's with Bleach and final fantasy VII nice.
DanDrake chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
I am liking the story so far but wouldn't combining wind,water, and lighting be a kekkei Touta instead of a kekkei genkai?
Mr. Nine chapter 17 . 9/12/2014
Great story can't wait for more
Kitten Arina chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
How my parents are? Means there alive. I can't tell you how your father is screams he is alive unless this whole time you meant who they are and can't say who he is.
Guest chapter 17 . 9/3/2014
Next chapter
Diana Luna Night chapter 17 . 8/26/2014
I am not much of a naruten fan, but I could care less with how good the story is. I would also like to see more of naruto's storm Justus.
Gold Testament chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
If I remember right Obito's mask when Naruto was born was just orange with a black flame pattern.
bandgsecurtiyaw chapter 17 . 8/20/2014
great work.
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