Reviews for The First Trip
Jade chapter 9 . 5/22
Thanks for this fic, it was really well written and you captured the characters brilliantly. Also can I just say, I think I enjoyed reading your Author's notes as much as the actual story, they genuinely made me laugh out loud, more than once. Good work! ;)
Jay chapter 3 . 5/21
When you were describing the hotel I was actually imagining the hotel from The Witches before I saw your comment! Haha :) great work btw
Jadeve chapter 2 . 5/21
I've read both prequels to this fic and I've gotten say you are now one of my favourite Johnlock authors! You've got their personalities and character traits down really well and I feel like this is how Sherlock really would act if he were to get into a relationship with John. So anyway, just wanted to say great job and keep it up because I love reading your work!

Ps. this chapter had me grinning like a high-functioning sociopath, especially when they fell off the bed stark naked! :)
Katelyn chapter 2 . 5/14
This was awesome. You are my favorite writer by far.
Guest chapter 11 . 3/8
That was perfect and madd me laugh out loud. Thank you!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/8
Supremely hot. Excellent use of the word "cock" ;)
tasha.vick chapter 11 . 12/14/2015
Loooove ur writing! :) so lovely,cute,in character,awesome,hot and oh so many more wonderful words! :))) my fav bit,the one that made me giggle like a kid: "Gertrude!...How is your enormous penis doing on this fine day?" xDDDDDDD
Keep it up,ur writing is the gift that keeps on giving,every once in a while I give one of ur stories a read to cheer myself up:))
Guest chapter 11 . 11/19/2015
I just spent many hours reading the whole trilogy, and i loved it. I know these were written years ago but i just loved them so much that i wanted to say it. I feel like the dtiology was very true to charter ( which is hard due to how great the writers of the show are) and you had amazing detail from the show woven in. I'm currently sick and this made my day much more fun. thank you. I will now go read more of you writing because your amazing.
Wordthrift chapter 11 . 11/6/2015
Bravo! Seriously. I have spent an entire day reading your wonderful trilogy, literally avoiding all adult duties (as well as eating it seemed late in the day). this story was really well written, true to the characters, engaging, sexy and just a pleasure to read. Thank you for posting this brilliant piece of work. I couldn't put it down! *Swoon :)
hey chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
I lacked sleep because of you,
And got very bad headaches,
I laughed and cried.

tatum.shannon.5 chapter 11 . 7/4/2015
Hello there! I am in love with this story. Or trilogy, I suppose I should say. Last night at around 2 am I found part one, and upon realising it was a wonderful story, saved it for my better and more attentive hours. I just read all of these and am truly in love with the way you have depicted their relationship. Thank you, for writing this. Porn not included.
Just kidding xD I loved that insight to their relationship. The fact that Sherlock and John were both a little awkward at times was wonderful! And I love you more than tequila? That's just brilliant!
Guest chapter 11 . 4/7/2015
You are my favorite fanfic author! These have all been brilliant! PLEASE keep updating!
Guest chapter 11 . 3/26/2015
Omg! The swooning I'm doing! Seriously the most incredible story! That is exactly how their relationship would go. Perfect ending leaving me totally at peace with how they confrssed. I love sherlock on blow dart drugs so incredibley adorable. And john! I can not get enough of their relationship.
Marcia santos chapter 6 . 3/21/2015
Just wondering when they will do it for real, but still loving the journey. I hope they change times and I can't wait to she if John will make Sherlock loose control. (In a sex way)
Marcia Santos chapter 5 . 3/21/2015
I'm just loving this fic.
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