|Reviews for Dragons and Watchmen and Tyrants, Oh My!|
| Queen Farli chapter 4 . 3/10/2014
Very nice, glad you've started posting again. It was quite a sweet chapter this.
A book by Vetinari. Interesting. Will we we seeing extracts from it or simply referals?
Yes, you did get it up :)
Nice thing to come back to after a trying concert.
| Anmynous chapter 4 . 3/9/2014
Ooo, new chapter! Hmm, I ought to update my own. Aaany day now.
Ellipsises ... are a bit overused in this one, and could be replaced with a new sentence or a dash -
Dialogue seems to be getting a lot of focus, but there's no description of reactions during them, so they feel a bit expressionless. Like, glances to the side, or Temeraires ruff (probably folded back whenn Rust is talking to him, then flaring out when talking to young Sam)...
Speaking of Temeraire, what does he think of the local dragons and how they smell?
| Queen Farli chapter 3 . 3/5/2014
Two weeks, hmm? Pushing two years more like!
Anyway, if you are still writing I would be most intreagued to see where you are going with this tale.
I especially like the interaction with Vetinari and the two Captains.
| Shamus chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
where is his crew?
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 2 . 8/2/2012
Hmm, Vimes seems mostly in character. Vetinari seems a little too open, but broadly in character. Laurence, from what little I remember, seems in character as well.