|Reviews for Chaotic|
| sandlinerica chapter 31 . 6/27
This is a fucking awesome story! Are you ever gonna finish it? lol Please?
| dmcdroid chapter 15 . 6/17
| alwaysxxx chapter 31 . 5/24
I have read control three or four times whenever there is a lack of followed update fics. Just wanna tell you that Chaotic is a sequel worth finishing. Don't leave us hanging. Love your work!
| EnterpriseCaptain7 chapter 31 . 2/10
Oh please come back and finish this wonderful story! It's just to good to leave abandoned! Love your work so I hope you do come back to this!
| Jupiter chapter 31 . 1/9
Why oh why did you abandon this story? I loved it and I want more!
| Joan chapter 31 . 11/16/2015
Adorable story, but a lame ending, I guess you just gave up. Loved it tho.
| dellgirl68 chapter 31 . 10/29/2015
Iv read both of these stories a few time brilliant..would love it if you continued..
| Guest chapter 29 . 8/29/2015
Hi I've read this story and 'control' so many times I have lost count. I have read all your stories but these are my all time favourite. I would love (and I'm not above begging) to read a sequel to chaotic. I don't want them to split or cheat or anything but I would love to see how Jane deals with motherhood especially a teenager and how maura helps Jane deal with it but also helping their teenage daughter deal with an over protective mother.
| gretzel.bugarin chapter 31 . 6/25/2015
Going ON? I like this story!
| eiffpatrol chapter 19 . 2/24/2015
U are seriously one of the best and funniest writers i've come across in a loong time. I am in love with this!
| Rizzles101 chapter 17 . 1/16/2015
I think both this and Control are the best stories on here, please please please continue!
| Pamba chapter 31 . 1/13/2015
So is the end of the story or is it just taking a really long time to update!
I have been enjoying this story. I love when the writers bring children into the mix and make these stories truly their own.
The only point of contention for me is what an ass Tommy is. I think it would be really cool if Tommy met his soulmate and it totally changed his world and perceptive in life. I think he is such a dick because he is missing the other half of himself and he takes it out on Jane because she found her other half.
| RizzoliObsessed chapter 31 . 11/8/2014
will you be updating soon?
| LaPaloma chapter 31 . 8/16/2014
This can't be the end, there has to be more. I loved Control and this one so much. I would love to read more in this universe.
| Trinity Is God chapter 31 . 3/31/2014
Please update soon. This is one of my favorite stories by you of all R&D fanfiction. I have read both of them (control and this) so many times I can't even count!
Please please please!
I normally never beg an author either!
Thanks for writing how you do. It's wonderful to see a story where Jane isn't a chicken running away. Somehow I cant picture her ever doing that.