|Reviews for Life of Dawn Lily Potter|
| Magicmarauder171 chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
I like the idea of the story... But if Harry is five minutes older than Dawn then they're both one... How could a one year old do what Dawn does...they can't even speak properly?
| Reena Catheryn chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Um, I'm not a flamer or a troll but you need to seriously rethink this plot before continuing. No humans, be they muggle or wizard or witch, can naturally read minds. Nor can a toddler speak, or physically attack the Dark Lord (aka the most evil, powerful wizard of all time). Plus the curse words your using are a) unnecessary b) inaccurate and c) annoying. Plus a one year old would not be aware of anything happening. It sounds like you are beginning a story that will end up being wildly OOC, and revolve around a Mary Sue. Save yourself. Abort the plot. The idea itself is worth exploring, just please do it properly.