Reviews for Shadow Of The Snake
SB and OGMM chapter 4 . 2/22
Good work, I saw the Skyrim reference and I freaked out like a little girl, though the word Thu'um in this case wouldn't work since I'm pretty certain that when translated to English it means 'English'. Although I'm certain you won't see this review since you stopped updating years ago.
Guest chapter 8 . 2/8
A few comments: First, I love the story, second, in Latin, the verb is almost always placed at the end of the sentence, and in the words "under the light of the moon" you would use the Latin "Sub luce lunae" rather than "lucem", because you mean literally under the moon, and that goes with the ablative. Third, I'm fairly certain that Gawain fellow is a pedophile, judging by Cedric's reaction, and am sort of hoping that he tries something on Harry and gets burned. Literally. Please continue the story, you've simple GoT to!
huskielover94 chapter 8 . 1/18
you should continue this
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4
Get. A. Beta!
Please. You'd be doing us all a favour.
AnimangaLoverFE chapter 8 . 1/3
this story is magnificent...the plot is really well-thought and i really like this harry's personality...i am looking forward to the continuation...please do not drop this story...continue it and update soon...
babiluv22 chapter 8 . 12/22/2014
interesting and informative story
CynthiaRosenDale chapter 2 . 12/15/2014
Why did you give the requirement of at least two wives picked out before the age of 20, is this going to be harem fic? Please no, please no Ginny or any of the other couples. Can't Harry remain single or be with a guy. Well that's my opinion, and this is actually a pretty good fanfic but...
ElementalMaster16 chapter 8 . 12/13/2014
pretty cool fic so far! very detailed in a good way :) i would really like to know what you're planning for harry's guild though, if only to put my mind to rest from the various ideas that keep popping up as i'm reading this fic. as for your story idea, i like it a lot.

Dirigible-Plumpatch chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
This is a wonderful story... I'm assuming it has been abandoned, truly a shame. Adding a guild system is very original, a fantastic idea! I'm sure development of characters wouldn't be an issue had the story continued further than its current point, even so I am mostly happy with the current view of characters.

If this is continued, please allow some form of truce to form between Harry and ! Though I understand the first rather volatile meeting at the great feast, damaging an aspect of Harry's education doesn't seem like it will do him or others any favours. Thanks for this nice read!
MrGoob chapter 4 . 11/14/2014
Skyrim, really?
MrGoob chapter 3 . 11/14/2014
Am I the only person who noted that Family, Duty, Honor is the Tully house words, Fire And Blood are the Targaryn house words, and Ours Is Fury is the Baratheon house words from 'A Song of Ice And Fire'?

y u no sued yet?

Is this a HPDG story?

Is there lemons?

If so...


BDSM? ;) ilyk
SupernaturalRomanceIStheBest99 chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
Fuckin loved it!
Jawsett cntlogin chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
whats with these ficvs with scenes harry purchasing trunks and shit? seriously? its gettin old... and unnecessary
Algiz chapter 8 . 9/15/2014
Hey- just reviewing to say I absolutely love your story- what you've done with Hogwarts is marvelous, and Harry is a perfect little psychopath (I love him :D ). Anyways, I was finishing up this chapter when I noticed that the last time you updated was a couple years back! :( I think it's quite a realistic appropriation of a more Tom Riddle-ish Harry, as well as a reasonable explanation for a sudden billionaire!Harry (your class system is awesome)(and I'm not just talking about Hogwarts)(though that too) , and I would be really quite excited to read more! That having been said, I have reviewed, so you have no need to maim me (really, that'd be very rude of you anyway) and I hope you don't hunt me down and kill me anyway! :P
Live Long and Prosper!
Ryuu666 chapter 8 . 9/5/2014
Well, if you don't, I know where you live. I know where you sleep. And your parents won't recognize you when I am done. (Evil laughter)
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