Reviews for Holding On and Letting Go
Nikita2009 chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
He can work on my bathroom any damn day, js. Love this chapter!
Nikita2009 chapter 2 . 8/2/2012
Gah, Ella is so freaking adorable. So many good things about this chapter.
Nikita2009 chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Gah, so excited you're posting this! Thanks again for letting me pre-read. It's an honor. :)
BLilTXgirl chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
This certainly seems intriguing. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds.
Tinsley Warren chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
So there was a fire. She was with Jacob or had feelings for Jacob. She knew his dad. Her family is gone. She's alone. So did they all die in this fire and she moved because it was too much? Did she have anything to do with the fire? Hmm questions.

Jessica seems like she can be annoying and a possible problem.

Ella is adorable and I love her nickname for Bella!

Edward sure is something!

I can't wait for more!
ksw3 chapter 2 . 8/2/2012
Good start to your new story. Sounds like a lot is going on and I can't wait to read more. Love your writing. I have read several of your stories. Tank you for starting thus new one. I will keep reading.
Tinsley Warren chapter 2 . 8/2/2012
Hmm so Edwards family is the masens and they pretty much ran the town? His grandmother is sick and he's coming back home to spend time with her.

Is Rose his sister or his ex girlfriend? Like is Ella his daughter or roses daughter? Or their daughter? He seemed weird about the birth certificate.

And hmm I wonder who this girl is...
Tinsley Warren chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Ohh this sounds good.

I wonder what her background is and how she's broken? And what Edward means to all of this...
Melany333 chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
looking forward to more
fuz chapter 2 . 8/2/2012
Bella and Ella! Sounds pretty good. Ohmygod, there will be situations with Rosalie! Will there? A sound and solid start for a new story, I am glad to join you. Thanks!
FFpassion chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
I'm really liking Bella, she seems to have had a lot happen to her and she's trying hard to let 't wait to find out more, great start, I'm really enjoying your new story.
love
Irene
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FFpassion chapter 2 . 8/2/2012
I'm loving Edward!
Trying to figure things out, is Ella Rose's daughter and Edward stepped up to raise her as his?
hmmm
Can't wait to read more.
Thank you for writing and spoiling us with 3 chapters :)
love
Irene
xxx
FFpassion chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
I'm so happy to see your alert in my box today, I'm really enjoying your new story.
Thank you
Irene
xxxx
StackedLikeSookie chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
Mmmm, Southerward...niiiice! X
IndiaInk68 chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
Already hooked ! what can I say except Awesome story ! Really looking forward to updates !
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