|Reviews for The Distance In Between|
| cherylstweedy chapter 34 . 3/4
What a truly wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it with us readers.
p.s. You said in one of your author's note period piece stories weren't popular. They are when their written exceptionally well, like yours.
| maphie chapter 34 . 3/4
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| maphie chapter 22 . 3/4
They say such lovely words to each other as if taking their wedding vows over and over. I love this Bella. I wish cannon Bella could direct canon Edward's thoughts and doubts as well as the Bella in this story.
| maphie chapter 18 . 3/3
I'm in tears reading this chapter. So good.
| maphie chapter 17 . 3/3
| melton.cecilia chapter 33 . 3/1
Okay, I love this story but Bella sometime grrrrr! And her lifting the beam and being an avenging angel just too much! It's just my opinion but I do love your writing and of course take my comment lightly no malice intended! I think it's good you bring out passion in your readers! Good job
| Guest chapter 34 . 2/12
Thanks for sharing your story. I liked that you created a bond between these two characters that was true to the story but also a binding based on the realities of bearing hardships likely to be encountered in that era. It's not all sugarplums and the difficulties encountered would have been likely. Truly the idealism of equality in the story would have been revolutionary for society that was incredibly repressed, but ready for change. Rose being raped (un avenged), Carlisle's dementia, death, extended families living together and the horrors of war created angst that were necessary to the story, but as stated life continues. Thanks for sharing this saga.
| REgrrl chapter 17 . 2/10
A very difficult chapter. You truly show the grit and determination needed during hard times. Laudable but hard to endure. Sad to see the despicable realities that war permits some to justify. Rape and pillage in this instance.
| Lulabell75 chapter 34 . 12/27/2013
Loved, loved, loved it!
| ai se eu te pego chapter 23 . 12/23/2013
| Milly Dorian chapter 34 . 12/1/2013
A sweet and wonderful story and I liked it very much!
Thank you for your generosity.
| PINKSAPPHYR chapter 34 . 11/24/2013
Oh WOW... I'm sorry I didn't review all the chapters like I'd planned but it was too good, too gripping to stop reading even for a minute! I read it all in one go!
It was so full of emotions, pure joy and absolute love but also so much grief and sadness at times... It was a whirlwind of feelings and your words simply took my breath away!
Your Bella was magnificent, your Edward was so perfectly human and all the other characters were truly wonderfully written! So many details, so deep and well-thought personalities...
The tragedies were very hard to bear but reading about their love, so pure, so complete, so absolute was a balm to all this hurt and evil!
Thank you for sharing your words and for taking me into this world you created, it was very much appreciated! X Cecile
| Star White chapter 34 . 11/11/2013
Hello, Just had to say that I have been reading your story here for over a week every chance possible. Thank goodness it was a 3 day weekend for me. What a story. It reminded me of a mini series TV movie. It should be in fact ! I loved these characters, though they had many hard times. But then this era wasn't know for being an easy time. Loved how Bella was the Force behind her family. She even scolded God. lol I truly loved it. It you haven't entered in a Fic Contest,you should. It should win some type of an award. WIsh I could give you one. Just know that I will follow your stories because you are definitely an Amazing writer. HUGS!
| LaSpia chapter 22 . 10/22/2013
Oh, this chapter had me crying so many times. Such sweet, sweet deep love. You write a love like theirs in such a way that it should be the envy of everyone. I thought I had experienced stong emotion when he left, but their reunion has been even stronger. Your writing, phrasing, dialogue is really excellent. I know that I am a latecomer to this lovely story, but I've enjoyed every word thus far. Bravo.