|Reviews for The Road Paved in Concepts|
| Ninon Beart chapter 41 . 2/5
With Nephenee added to his deck, courtesy of the last few Fire Emblem chapters, Starsky now has a dedicated melee machine to help balance out all those ranged attackers..."ranged" being one of the first things that comes to mind when someone even mentions Touhou to me.
Hehehe...Locke is certainly proving to be a fun supporting character. The goofball interplay between him and Louis is turning out to be comedy gold! I look forward to seeing more of his endearing stupidity in future chapters.
| Theburper chapter 41 . 2/5
Will they ever visit RWBY?
| Ninon Beart chapter 39 . 12/17/2014
Wow...Beast mode Louis is quite formidable. And scary.
NO! Not the guy with the least interesting hair! What did he ever do to deserve that beating!?
Hehehe...Concept Road never fails to elicit a giggle or two from me.
Though nothing will probably EVER top "What up Louie Stizzle!"
Snoop Lulu was utterly hilarious!
| Reckless Flamingo chapter 38 . 12/9/2014
nc story bro
| Ninon Beart chapter 37 . 10/25/2014
Cherry tapped by a chao...
Such a miserable fate for the poor random Fire Emblem thug.
| Ninon Beart chapter 36 . 9/16/2014
Starsky's earnest enthusiasm tempered by humility certainly is charming...and also rather disarming. Not to mention cute!
Not even the "Ordinary Magician" could resist being added to the friend pile!
The fated rematch was fun to read, though I kinda hoped for Lulu to appear and zap kleptowitch with Whimsy. A Marisa doughnut would be much more easier to beat. Or Marisa the hairball...
Hehehe...One cannot help but smile at and feel drawn to such a likeable OC protagonist as Louis!
| RandomNumbers523156 chapter 36 . 9/16/2014
Congratulations, Louis, you opened the possibility for a kleptomaniac witch steal in other universes.
| Ninon Beart chapter 35 . 8/23/2014
The "Detours in the Road" series of supplementary side snippets certainly are turning out to be GREAT and goofy additions to the main story.
I can almost hear the Looney Tunes theme song playing in my head while reading them! Hehehe...
Oh...And doggy Louis is BEST Louis! Mwahaha...
| Ziden115 chapter 35 . 8/22/2014
Jesus christ, the randomness in this chapter after Drosy appeared, what the hell man! Its weird but hey I love random and I love this story but I wonder...is Zelda or Mario gonna turn up in this series?
| RandomNumbers523156 chapter 35 . 8/20/2014
Hm, interesting how Drosselmeyer caught up very well on how Gensokyo works, he seems to been having fun. If this were an anime, the part in which Yukari shows her scary face would include only a shot the back of the hair and Louis's scared expression. Keep going!
| RandomNumbers523156 chapter 34 . 7/18/2014
Finally caught up and I guess I don't have much else to add other than I already said, I would just suggest to add a title for when the world changes (like you add when an oponente is presented, you should add when you arrive in an world as well). Otherwise, I must commend you for exploring how amazing the Touhou setting is, and I'll look forward for the second vocaloid arc (it seems fame has risen to Miku's head). Keep going!
| illusion2438 chapter 34 . 7/18/2014
Cirno doing JoJo poses. I approve.
| Ninon Beart chapter 34 . 7/17/2014
And so Starsky's inexplicable type disadvantage against ice/fairy proved to be his undoing...
...He really should have stayed out of the tall grass.
Truly, a relentless elemental force of nature like Cirno cannot be stopped. She felled poor Pix with a devious combination of Attract and Sheer Cold!
Eheheh. And speaking of contracts...
Cupid's Harpoon, Earth-Sized Pedestal, Guntech - Access Points...The various Unity Sign dual technique Spell Cards that Louis shares with several of his party members are pretty creative fanfic additions to a contracted character's canon powerset. And Starsky gets a useful stat boost too!
...It's a shame that the one summon limit prohibits triple techs.
In any case, I look forward to seeing more of them in the future. Till next time!
| RandomNumbers523156 chapter 28 . 7/6/2014
Hm, I didn't expect this, so Louis is not entirely human anymore, and not to mention he took his own life. As much as he may had his reasons, he lost a lot of sympathy points when he said he took his life, because of how much utterly fake altruism he showed when he explained that he wanted to die (not to mention the 'kill youself to become an interdimensional traveler' - granted this wasn't in his original plan, but with this new resolve, he might be able to make it into a quest for redemption). Keep going!
| Ninon Beart chapter 33 . 7/1/2014
Oh dear. It seems that poor Louis is at a type disadvantage against ice/fairy. And none of his attacks were super effective too...
...This random encounter is going to get REALLY weird, isn't it?