|Reviews for Midsummer Tragedy|
| EscrimaNightwing chapter 6 . 8/17
I am crying right now! But, it's good... (sob, sob)
| Brainless Genius chapter 55 . 2/16
I think you handled a very serious topic well with this story. You didn't minimize the story's power by reversing it at the end, although I must admit I didn't see the time travel/hallucinations coming at all. The only thing I think could have been handled better was how mental illness was portrayed- you make it seem like all gun violence is carried out by mentally ill people, but only 3-5% of violence is committed by people with a mental illness, and the mentally ill are actually 10 times more likely to be victims of violence. (In case you're interested, I found these statistics from multiple sources on everydayfeminism.)
But besides that, I thought you handled it all respectfully, even though the subject matter was very sad. Great job, and never stop doing what makes you happy!
| Bezerker21 chapter 1 . 2/10
Run. I'm going to kill you. No one kills Isabella and leaves phineas alive. Run
| Anne Trent chapter 16 . 10/7/2015
Buford called 911
| ITmaster chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
Well, that was just dark, but I liked the way you handled the story. To tell you the truth, it's complex, with elements of suspense and philosophical questions that played around over the main theme which revolves about the effects of tragedies, especially meaningless shootings.
Hope you keep writing like this.
| rangers123 chapter 55 . 10/9/2014
I just managed to stumble upon this story while I was looking for something to read at home.
I have seen good stories, I have seen excellent stories, but now I have seen the best of the best. So much happened in this story...and I just thought it would be about a tragedy, which turned out to be so much more. In 55 chapters you dealt with everything from gun violence in our nation to terrorism to the mental health problems that victims of gun violence face to survivors' guilt and backlash to conspiracies. Forgive me if I've missed any major points of emphasis.
I think I speak for all that have read this story in that I was confused more than several times through this story, especially with the time travelling and jumping around between dates. It was so much I ended up having to draw out a timeline (and alternates) to figure out what was going on.
Two and a half hours of reading this really did me in. I congratulate you on this masterpiece. I'm looking forward to see more P/F stories from you in the future. Ciao.
| Avatar Rikki chapter 55 . 8/31/2014
That was long, and crazy. I feel kinda bad that I took 3 hours to read this when I should be doing homework (but there's a holiday tomorrow so I don't really care). But at the same time, I'm glad I read it. It always seems like a taboo thing to do, killing off main characters/turning them evil, but you did it really well. Kinda wish I knew your secret. Anyway, the ending was really good and I felt like it really tied the whole story together. Wonderful job!
| Guest chapter 55 . 8/9/2014
This is one of the best stories I've seen on the site if not the best. Thanks and CARPE DIEM!
| james.b.cameron chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
i love the way you handled the time travel part of it and not bringing them back was brave
| CheerFulNRose chapter 54 . 5/25/2014
I love it! This is the best, I repeat the BEST! Fanfic EVER! :D Amazing! But.. still.. Izzy died but I still love it! Phineas is my 2nd favorite so gotta give ya' credit! For keeping him strong! I did cry a bit.. No lie.. :') It was still amazing! Never thought I'd read a FanFic so beautiful! :D
| Guesty chapter 55 . 4/5/2014
I was a bit upset... U still left us at a cliff hanger (technically) I'm a big ferb fan so I was expecting to see more of him in this chapter. Well good story. defiantly, but poor ending to my opinion. Remember it's just an opinion lol
| Alanshee the Guardian chapter 55 . 2/22/2014
I switched my name back to Special Agent alanshee but it me Dannyphantomspetcocketiellucy saying this was a awsome story brings to light the attrocities of a shooting you did such a good job hope to read another one of your storys soon
| Adysonlover461 chapter 55 . 12/6/2013
This is the BEST fanfic I have ever read I love you!
| Zels the weeb chapter 55 . 11/9/2013
I'm sorry for write this review but Fuck you, you fucking killed Adyson you made her have sex with her cousin and for crying out loud FUCK YOU there are some things in this story that are so unrealistic like when someone is jealous of their brother THEY JUST WANT TO KILL THEIR BROTHER'S FRIENDS. WHAT?And when someone does something awful like killing a million people THEIR FAMILYS SHOULD NOT BE BLAMED!AHHHHH!But the other part of the story is you in a shotting?Because the shotting part was so well-written congrats.
Congrats and Fuck you.
| FanFicCriTicTheThird chapter 38 . 10/27/2013
I recently discovered lost reviews(don't ask I don't understand either)
"Computers are evil
Evil I tell you
Anyways this FanFicCriTicTheThird
So Ferb people gonna start blaming
Anyways when I said update as I am typing this I wasn't being literal
But its real cool how your able to balance three stories without abandoning one or going on a hiatus
Again that is
Sooo Ferb wish you the best of luck
Seeya ; )"
I just pasted it as it was and um.. this is weird so yeah